Yes, just as the description said, I wrote a couple of poems recently, mostly off the top of my head. I figure, I have to start somewhere. So: I'll post the first few, let you chew them up and spit them out, then I'll probably work on some more.

These all have a sort of lonely, ambient sort of feel to them. I was in that sort of mindset when I wrote them. So for the most part, one sort of capitalizes off of one of the last lines' words as part of the theme for the next, as I wrote them one after another.


Lost
click, clack, click, clack
footsteps echo in darkness
breath and heartbeat
fill your hearing, suspense
tense and relax
lax and lost


Found
Discovery:
darkness banished
liquid light
pools flicker
ripple
Moonlit Ocean


Cave
drip, clack
frozen sound
flickering sight
stalactite, stalagmite
sit tight
fear or flight


Fear
Mind static, concentrate
crawl, sounds skitter
rumble, tumble
flight, fumble
Alone in the Dark

that seems very good , i write dark poetry myself

Very good job! I'm always impressed when a poet can write poetry in an abstract style that conjures up vivid mental images, which you have done very well! The ongoing theme of the poems smoothly flows from one poem to the next, which is great! I am truly impressed by your work!