Title: Poem for an angel
Description: I wrote this for my gf how does it sound
Rufio - November 27, 2003 12:16 AM (GMT)
I dont think you realize,
just what you mean to me,
and I dont think you know,
that when I hold you in my arms,
I never want to let you go.
At night I lay awake and wonder
what you see in me...
Whatever that is I'm glad you've seen it,
Because you are everything to me.
Your the inspiration for everything I do
...I guess all I'm trying to say...
.....Is that I'm in love with you....
Yea, I know it isnt that great...but I figured that someone would be able to give me some pointers, I'm an alright writer but I want to get better.
-Rufio-
Elsie - November 27, 2003 12:46 AM (GMT)
its not the most wonderful poem technically, however it is very sweet and conveys the meaning well. ^__^
Rufio - November 27, 2003 03:48 AM (GMT)
I know...poem writing isnt exactly my thing, and as of late I have been suffereing from writers block...it sucks.
FrozenShade - February 11, 2004 06:07 PM (GMT)
Awwww...its so sweet. If you ever need pointers and such, Dustin you know you can come to me. ^_^
Rufio - February 12, 2004 02:56 AM (GMT)
WEather or not it's sweet doesnt really matter anymore
FrozenShade - February 13, 2004 01:30 PM (GMT)
I know, but I still believe it is. How are you doing over it Dustin? You know if you need me I will always be here.
Kakarrot-Sama - February 20, 2004 09:58 AM (GMT)
Wow that could catch a heart or two :D it's good cause it's from the heart.
Rufio - February 20, 2004 10:28 PM (GMT)
I'm doing fine over it...I've been fine with it for a long time...stuff like this happens. Thanks though, and thanks for all the good comments, I'm glad people dont think my stuff sucks too much.