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Title: Poem: Queen of Love
Description: Something I did on a whim...


Raguna Megido - November 5, 2003 08:10 PM (GMT)
I originally posted this at another forum I go to, as an "Off The Top Of My Head" poem which I do occasionally...
Anyway, enjoy it or not.. whatever. :lol:
(This was originially posted on 11-24-03 at D-P by myself).

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~ Queen of Love (Tentative) ~


Many men come and go.
But what will you do when they've all come and went?

Their last heart lie broken, crushed in your hands.
Every chord of their emotions you played like a harp.
Snap!
You cut the chords without a second thought.

And you wonder why you're alone now.
You wonder why they hate you, why they use you..
Just as you used them.

Even an old dog with his favourite bone loses his interest some day,
when there's nothing left to play with..

The same with your men, the same with you.

Broken hearts and broken lives lie in your wake.

You do nothing.
Say nothing.

They all mean nothing, just as you mean
nothing to them..
and soon too for everyone you touch with your cursed hands.

What have you become?

...if there was ever anything much to become in the first place

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As a side note, I know the spacing (for me at least) doesn't look quite right on one of my "all"s there, but it is spaced properly, I even tried adding a space and it still looked funky, my appologies.
What can you expect though from something off the top of my head though. =P

FrozenShade - November 5, 2003 11:05 PM (GMT)
OOOO! I LOVE it! ^.^ It is really good, though sounds more like a song then a poem. O.o You should try putting music to it.

JadedEyes - November 6, 2003 01:46 PM (GMT)
you have a way with words! i like that poem! ^___^ love is the most powerful energy in the world-with love no one can stop you! ^__^

Raguna Megido - November 6, 2003 11:05 PM (GMT)
I'm glad both of you enjoyed it. n_n

FrozenShade, thanks, but much as I love music I probably wouldn't know to put something to music (or not) if it bit me on the bum.
Plus, music isn't my forté. I have the hands of a pianist, would love to play it (along with any number of instruments including guitar), but probably would suck at it verily. :lol:

JadedEyes, thank you as well. n_n
Love is indeed very powerful, perhaps of of the most powerful things
there is, but sometimes even it fails sadly..
But I'd like to believe that in the end, true love can prevail..

As a side note, I couldn't think of a good title and the name of it is actually something I pulled from a Matsumoto Hideto (hide) song that was stuck in my head. :lol:
"You're beauty queen of love. I'm stupid slave of love."




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