This is the latest story I'm working on, I really like it. I'd of said the name I've chosen for it so far, but it is going to change sometime or another. Tell me what you think! :D

My Story

Good start to the story, very descriptive which = awesome. Well in mine and most peoples eyes. I'll look forward to more of it, nice work.

To update, I updated! I was bored one evening, so I typed up what I had done so far. :P It isn't the whole chapter, but you can read it if you want since it's there. Keep in mind I haven't spellchecked it yet, either.