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Title: Don't
Description: Dedication to my Late Aunt


Kakarrot-Sama - February 11, 2004 12:13 AM (GMT)
Don't by Kakarrot-Sama

Don't spend too much time
In mourning
Tears are for the sad
I left to be with the angels
And that should make you glad
Don't waste your hour in grieving
No need to feel distress
I'm tired of life's frustrations
And had to get some rest
Don't vex yourself with questions
Or try to reason why.
Life for me has ended
It came my time to die.

Don't lose the love I gave you
Feed it with your care
Grow it with devotion
And spread it everywhere
Don't fret because my leaving
Came in such a way
We still have another meeting
In god's eternal day.
This poem is dedicated to my late Auntie Kareemah. I'am sure she would want me to live my life in happiness and not feel sad, God bless her soul.

FrozenShade - February 11, 2004 06:15 PM (GMT)
Awwww. ;_; It is soooo sad. You made me cry. This poem makes me think of all the people I have known that died in my lifetime so far. Way to go, rhyhmn scheme was awsome, and so was the word usage. Simple, but displaying lots of eeling and emotion. Way to go and keep up the poetry writing. I want to hear more from 'ya.




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