Title: Small Poem
Johonoknat - March 15, 2004 12:56 AM (GMT)
My heart,
Shattered like glass
Pick up the peices
Make me whole at last
Give me fealing
Give me a light
And a reason to rise
After the long, cold night
Make my heart soar
Let my soul sing
The day shall come
When once again, I am breathing
Comming as quickly
As the dawn- you will see
And when I do
Wrap your arms around me
Hold me close
Tell me that everything will be alright
And make me believe
That you'll be with me through the next night
Elsie - March 15, 2004 11:39 PM (GMT)
its a fine poem...but it does seem kind of cliche....
Johonoknat - March 17, 2004 07:11 AM (GMT)
Perhaps... but cliche or not, there is meaning behind it, so isn't that what matters?
Elsie - March 18, 2004 12:53 AM (GMT)
....the meaning matters but the expression of it is also not insignifigant. mostly your intent determines what is important...
wonder what inspired you to write it...
Johonoknat - March 19, 2004 03:53 AM (GMT)
I may be getting a new girlfriend soon, but after horrible breakup, I am afraid, yet hopefull that this will turn out for the better.
Elsie - March 26, 2004 01:19 AM (GMT)
be not afraid...not much to lose, and everything to gain if it works out better next time. good luck! ^_^
Meow its me. - March 26, 2004 03:26 AM (GMT)
Nice poem, its always good to express emotion. Kudos.