Hey I would really appreciate it if I could get some oppinions on these poems. I do have an acount on AR but I wanted to post these anonymously. :) Thanks for the comments! (If there happen to be any sometime)

Weak Heart
Dreams, fantasies, wishes that wont come true
Why do we have these things?
They just wind up hurting us
as we realize they can't become
People say the human heart
is a power thing
but what power does it have?
So weak and fragile
So easy to hurt
Is it really so powerful now?
If its not strong enough
To save the ones you love
Or to keep them with you forever
Then its not very powerful at all

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Upon all sorrow
Their lies no hope
No glistening sun
Blessing the sky
A darkened void beyond comparison
No life amoungst it all
A barren land and sky
Kissed by a blood stained moon
The grin of evil and fear upon
Rivers of blood - seas of death
Corpses heavily burdening the ground
World of no freedom, no hope, no life
World amoungst worlds which time has forsaken

fairly good, not the best or worst that I've come across.

nice comcepts but the way the things are written could perhaps be more special or poetic.....