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Title: My Angel


Caya - July 28, 2004 11:17 PM (GMT)
An angel came to me

With one touch he healed me

With one kiss he restored me

I was lost but one word

Uttered from his lips

Guided me to salvation

One Look from his soft eyes

Made me feel like a goddess

But when he had helped me

One step away from me

Gave me confidence

But when he staied with me

I learned trust and faithfulness

Then when he became mortal for me

I learned love and devotion

And when we had our first child

I learned happiness and peace

But when they left

I felt loneliness and pain

But than my angel came to me

And I felt whole again

That angel was you

Shaper Geneson - January 27, 2005 04:59 AM (GMT)
Wow, beautiful work! This is truly a very emotional poem! You have successfully combined beautiful descriptions and vivid symbolism to produce a wonderful effect! Great work!

dark angel - January 27, 2005 11:48 PM (GMT)
you have true talent in writing poetry as it ryhmes real well . i luv to write all kinds of stuff that describes how i feel . that is truly a nice touching poem and is real good




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