An angel came to me
With one touch he healed me
With one kiss he restored me
I was lost but one word
Uttered from his lips
Guided me to salvation
One Look from his soft eyes
Made me feel like a goddess
But when he had helped me
One step away from me
Gave me confidence
But when he staied with me
I learned trust and faithfulness
Then when he became mortal for me
I learned love and devotion
And when we had our first child
I learned happiness and peace
But when they left
I felt loneliness and pain
But than my angel came to me
And I felt whole again
That angel was you
Wow, beautiful work! This is truly a very emotional poem! You have successfully combined beautiful descriptions and vivid symbolism to produce a wonderful effect! Great work!
you have true talent in writing poetry as it ryhmes real well . i luv to write all kinds of stuff that describes how i feel . that is truly a nice touching poem and is real good