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1 qestion mich! am i allowed romance here?

i will tell you want it is going to be:
it's about gurs life with his bestfriend, how they fell for each other after 12 years of friendship! is that good!

sounds gd 2 me

Ooh yes, that's good! I'd love to read that! :clap:

-mich

YAY!! A ROMANTIC MUSHY STORY!! YAY!! sorry lol

lol :P

Ok that's good! I will post the story when I have more time to post, probally tomorrow! Ok... Well i will add some twist and turns into it! Ok!

PS: Should I have a romantic horror or a sad romantic?

Well the story will start in front of the girl’s house, and it’s rainy and it’s also thundering.

We will call the guy Max and the girl Erica OK!

Oh yeah don’t take anything here as a racist comment! It’s just to add a bit more personality. I’m nowhere racist!

THE STORY BEGINS HERE!

PART ONE!

The Future!

Max left the prom that evening, as he drove away in his car and on his way towards Erica’ house. He drove past the usual route, which was the road on the cliff, and he was already drunk a little bit.
“God Erica!” He threw the bottle of beer outside the window, crying, he speed up around the corner as he was reaching the cliff. It was dark and he was reaching 70 miles per hour, and quickly speeding up. As he was about to turn the corner on the cliff, he heard a horn approaching his way, before he did anything, his wheels skidded and his car circled and off the cliff he goes!

2 Weeks before.

Max was sitting in the lunch area with Erica and Cleresa. They were talking about the prom that was coming soon.
“So have you asked someone to the prom?” Cleresa asked, then she drunk the last bit of the juice.
“No… Why?” Looked as Max, then smiled.
“Well I thought you would, you’re like the most popular girl around.
“Man! You should ask Sam… Boy you need some,” As Zoey approached, she has black skin and bushy hair.
(Don’t take this personal; I actually think this makes a great thing in the story)
“I don’t know… Max? What do you think?” Looked at him again, hoping to get a good answer.
“I don’t know, hey this is weird, your asking my for advice about man, no can do!”
“I know what would be good!” as Ben approached them. He placed his hand on Erica’s shoulder; “I think we should go as a group. No offence Zoey, but you have Nathan,” Ben said, and he looked over the lunch court to see Nathan who then smiled at Zoey when she turned around to see.
“Oh man… Ok. I think it’s a great Idea that you all go out together, I mean you know each other.” Zoey left them and approached Nathan.
“So who’s going with who?” Erica asked.
“I think Max and Eri…” Cleresa stopped as Nathan interrupted.
“I think I should go with you!” as he held Erica’s hand and kissed it, “and you two, well you two.”
Max looked a bit unhappy but felt all right after Erica kind of surged her shoulders and said, “Yes” in a disappointing way.

Well what do you think of that, the first quick part of Max and Erica!

gdgd.:D

ooh sounds interesting - can't wait to read more of it!!

Well ok since some one likes it i will post the next part in 24 hours. What do you think of the beginning... I think it was nice to see what is going to happen. Does anybody want't to know he Max dies or not?

Ok I did say I left, but I can show for a few minutes, anyway I said I was going to post more, but never got around to it so here is some more.

Max was rather dissapointed by the fact that he was not going out with Erica, he knew Nathan to well to get into some mess, so he did, he had fogotten about it the next day.

At the local Cafe.

Zoey and Cleresa walked in as they we gossiping about Mike's new haird style.
"I mean, what year is it, the 70s or what... He has no sense of style." Cleresa laughed, as Joey kept on talking about Mikas hair style.
"I mean, no wonder he is in the chess club, i mean there all..." "What dorks!" Mike intterupted as he was just standing right behind them, Both Cleresa and Joeys back hair rose.
"I wish he would tell us... Or you." Joey spoke once again, as she noticed Max, sitting by himself, drinking his Latte.
"Are these seat available?" Cleresa asked, as she hinted the man to make two lattes.
"Dont be down boy." Joey said, as she moved Max's belongings. "it's not lik Nathan and Erica is going out..."
"You spoke to soon" Max told.
As Nathan just kissed Erica the moment Joey spoke.
"Man, boy your too down... I know, maybe she can go with you." Joey pointed at Cleresa.
"And that is even a better idea." Cleresa dissagreed. "You should think what you say, right max."
Max just shruged his shoulder and turned away from the window. The bar tender approched with two lattes in his hand.
"Two lattes, for two young laddies." The bar tender spoke.
"Oh... No nicy, nicy to us" Joey replied.
The bartender handed the Latte into their hands, and left, and shortly after that Erica walked in.
"Hey Max! I nee... Doesnt matter" Erica asked, but was interrupted by Nathan surprise visit.
"I'm not going to let you out of my site." said Nathan.
Erica shruged at Max, but Max didnt seem to care. He just sat there mixing in more sugar.
"Are you trying to be diabetic?" Joey asked, "A few more spoonfulls and your in with those Sugar haters!"
"Sorry." Max replied.

Soo... It needs a little bit of work, but it's alright.

it's good!

Cool! When R you Going to post more?

it stopped just like that no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!