"Today I bought two Golden Mystery snails for my new aquarium community. Unfortunately after a few hours one of the snails died. I read that mystery snails are known to float dormant but this snail is not clammed shut. Its body is partly hanging out of the shell and is non responsive to touch. Am I right to assume this snail is dead?"
When snails die, their traps open, and their bodies may hang out. If alive and touched, a snail will normally try to shut itself in. So, it sounds like he/she's dead.
"The spiral on the dead snail is badly corroded and a dark colour. The other snail has the very beginings of the same deterioration."
Shell deterioration is often due to low mineral levels (mostly calcium) in a tank. A low pH often goes along with that.
"The pH for my new tank is 7.2-7.4. I am going to have the water tested for ammonia etc tomorrow. I am gradually trying to bring the pH down to 7. Is this pH acceptable for the snails?"
They would like a pH of 7 to 8 so your pH is already ideal. Don't lower it too much. The more acidic the water, the more the shells will degrade.
"I did notice that the snail seemed to die after crawlling near a pice of aquarium rock. I am not sure if it actually crawled over the rock but I found it next to the rock and the piece of driftwood (I did see it on the driftwood). I am wondering if there is somthing toxic in the rock or driftwood (or the plant on the driftwood). My catfish spend time fossicking around the rock and seem ok. Perhaps there was something in the driftwood?"
What's "fossicking?" Driftwood if not properly treated may lower the pH somewhat. It releases lignins and tannins which in the levels that would be likely would not harm the snail or fish. Rocks may also alter the tank's pH and chemistry depending on what they are made of. Most rocks are either inert or increase the pH. A rock is not likely to be toxic. See
http://www.fishpondinfo.com/decor.htm for how to treat driftwood.
"The tank is a cold water tank but the climate here is quite warm (we are going through a hot summer here in Australia) and the water isn't that cold to the touch. I am fairly sure the tank at the petshop was coldwater also. (I was told they would be fine in a coldwater tank). Is this true? Will the surviving snail be ok in the cold water tank? I will add that my tank model is one of those were the pump on the filter is in contact with the water and gives off some heat. What are the ideal temperature ranges for mystery snails?"
Mystery snails are normally apple snails which like warm water, 70-80 degrees F being ideal. They die below about 55 degrees F. See applesnail.net for more info on your snails, a lot more information!
"Is there anything you can see that I am doing wrong? Any thoughts would be greatly appreciated."
I just might add that mystery snails grow pretty large and may outgrow the size of your tank eventually.