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Title: Always Changing
Description: One of my poems


DVX - January 20, 2004 09:02 AM (GMT)
Always Changing


Comforming to the way I look through your eyes.
Losing everything deep inside.
Becoming what you could never be.
Losing yourself inside of me.
Sinking into a sea of dreams, spinning between truth and fantasy.
Turning up but falling down.
Watching everything crash upon the ground.
Living my lie as if it's true.
Trying to care nothing for you.
Breathing your air like it's a drug.
Exceptting myself as everything you'll never love.
Being what I should have never been.
Lying to my heart once again.
Finding myself on a fimilar path.
Seeing a tear in every laugh.
Bending the spectrum from green to blue.
Looking through a distorted view.
Knowing where everything seems to end.
Losing myself in you again.
Becoming what you could never be, always changing

blkwdw13 - January 20, 2004 08:37 PM (GMT)
I like it but there is something odd about it, I just can't put my finger on it.

FairytaleNightmares - January 20, 2004 11:39 PM (GMT)
... give me your powers of art and literature!

DVX - January 21, 2004 07:55 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (blkwdw13 @ Jan 20 2004, 04:37 PM)
I like it but there is something odd about it, I just can't put my finger on it.

Yea, there is something odd about it. I think it is how at the start of every line I use a word that ends with -ing.

blkwdw13 - January 21, 2004 05:09 PM (GMT)
I think that is it, I just realize that you did that though until you mentioned it.

DVX - January 21, 2004 07:17 PM (GMT)
I didn't realize I did it until I was already finished writing it.




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