well its a song, iv been tryin to make a demo with my friends donno if it's that great, yea u could say stuff, i don't rly care, been makin it for awhile now, hopefuly almost done, but anyway yea plz check it out, The Beat is Slow, not to slow but i guess you can get it after awhile, and a few more things
Names- Mine-Kraker
my friends- Bling
COmpany- Wite Boyz iNc.
Hope you like, not all of it rymes but hell i tried my best.
This one is pretty short, but it's ok my others are pretty long.

-CURSING- so don't come in if u are not old enough

Club Night

We coming in the club dog like it or not
We shooting every #####, ugly or hot
Ima put a cap in your ass and make you crap
I should grab a 40 oz and hit you over the head
#### your girl and make the bed wet
You better hope to god I don’t kill you and your #####
For all the #### you said
Because at the club we…

[Chouse X2]
Club night! : We party all the time
Clue night! : We #### all night
Club night! : Bring your gunz and knifes
Club night! : Drink and have a good time

These guyz act like they all tough
They think there 50, big and buff
When I think they should just shut the #### up
They say this and that #### like
I love dick and im fat
#### your one stupid ##### for thinking that
Ima jump your ass and bling got my back
Cause now you in the club and we…

[Chouse X2]
Club night! : We party all the time
Clue night! : We #### all night
Club night! : Bring your gunz and knifes
Club night! : Drink and have a good time

Now grab a smoke and let the good times role
Now ima pop some #### here we go
Im in the car with my 24 yo
Two girls on the side looking through my window
One was a hoe, the other ugly and fat
One scary the other ####able [Bling] For Sho
Now ima just give up on these hoes
Give me one last light for the night. And here we GO!

[Chouse X2]
Club night! : We party all the time
Clue night! : We #### all night
Club night! : Bring your gunz and knifes
Club night! : Drink and have a good time

Bling- Yea #####! WIte BOyZ Inc! You #####es got nothing on us!
Kraker- Bling and kraker here, you looking for a fight? Come to the club night! #####!!

ur white well first i hope and pray ur not using Nigga in the song because if ur white ur demo will get tossed as soon as they hear that word, second im listen to a X beat while im trying to read the lyrics it sounds alright it flows but the lyrics are trash im keep it real wit u, where u from do really hold heat like u say and are u really that bout it in tha club, u got potentially but u need to rhyme more about what happens to u or what happend to u im just keeping it real dawg, this is some terrible ####. Listen to what i tell u and u should be good, and practice hard.

im puerto rican as well as white(italian first of all and if i want to say nigger i can, but i won't cuz i don't need to, sencond this took me a total of 5 mins this isnt the real ####, i rly havent even started the demo just makin lyrics, and yes it's not the greatest but to say that it's #### thats wrong, and yea i am like that but no i don't go to the club but u rly think 50 got shot 9 times? my ass he did, good story = good lyrics, end of story.

Look homie im just keeping it real wit u and 50 did get shot nine times its proven. Look u asked for someone tell u what they think and i told u hell it was crap im keep it real! I ain't going to lie ok u wrote in 5 mins impress me homie damn. Don't tell me what im wrong for im around people who rhyme every day all day i know when good stuff when i come across it im true hip-hop fan and i ain't going to lie to anyone just improve and make it better.

No it wasn't proven he was shot 9 times. his story is pretty much bullshit if u hear wat he said when he first "got shot 9 times"
He was 8 blocks away from the hospital and says he walked 3 of them after his friend left him off. see so i find it BULLShiIT, ok? ok good.

I think i know your hobby. Your pretty good too. well, a whole lot better than me. A LOT better than me. I can't rhyme, even if my life depended on it.

Itz alright, i think the newer ones i did are better.