Title: Hello.
Halo - December 12, 2004 02:33 PM (GMT)
*steps on stage* o.o *looks around*.. Ahem. *looks at paper* Okay! Umm...
Poem has no name.
She looks like a child
With daisies in her eyes
Blood in her palms,
Silence as she cries.
The moon shines above her
Black as it dies
Stars shattering forever,
Falling from the skies.
Blood stains her white dress
And blood is in her hair
Blood taints her lips,
Death is in her stare.
The Angels weep,
And blood stains their tears
Crying for innocence,
Upon the loss of a child’s years.
*bows* Thank you.
*walks away*
babyanime - December 12, 2004 07:54 PM (GMT)
*applauds*that was so good.i really enjoyed that. you write poetry very well.i write it as well
Halo - December 15, 2004 05:30 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (babyanime @ Dec 12 2004, 03:54 PM) |
| *applauds*that was so good.i really enjoyed that. you write poetry very well.i write it as well |
Thank you for reading. ^^ I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'd like to read your poetry too.
Teru-chan - December 16, 2004 10:19 AM (GMT)
thats pretty good halo. good work.
Doomtrain - December 17, 2004 01:30 PM (GMT)
OH MY GOD, THATS SO COOL!
Halo - December 17, 2004 02:44 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Doomtrain @ Dec 17 2004, 09:30 AM) |
| OH MY GOD, THATS SO COOL! |
| QUOTE (Teruraku @ Dec 16 2004, 06:19 AM) |
| thats pretty good halo. good work. |
Sarcasm is not allowed in my topic. D<
However, if you are not being sarcastic, Thank you. =D Glad you like it.
Teru-chan - December 18, 2004 11:28 AM (GMT)
i am never sarcastic. well..not now anyway, i meant what i said.
Poison - January 11, 2005 12:53 PM (GMT)
oooohhhh, that IS cool! no sarcasm! oh no! that is VERY cool! teehee!
SilverAlchemist - January 19, 2005 11:58 PM (GMT)
I write poems and won awards for them and there awsome but your's is far out better than any of mine.... i would post one of mine but i dont want to seem as if im trying to copy you and get attention. Well good job!! *applauds*
Amarant - January 20, 2005 05:43 PM (GMT)
That was very good Halo, post another one.
vash leonheart - January 20, 2005 06:46 PM (GMT)
Inuyasha1112 - January 22, 2005 09:57 PM (GMT)
Elevate - January 24, 2005 05:43 AM (GMT)
Poison - March 16, 2005 12:48 PM (GMT)
I printed it and stuck it on my wall...
Elevate - March 17, 2005 03:49 AM (GMT)
Ok i am going to rephase myself, i dont like it :(
Apollo - March 17, 2005 03:24 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (D12 @ Mar 16 2005, 11:49 PM) |
| Ok i am going to rephase myself, i dont like it :( |
It's not nice to lie. =(
Rinoa - April 4, 2005 11:50 AM (GMT)
i've decided. i dont like him. THATS MEAN! :ermm: :ermm: