Title: Poem
Lion - February 19, 2005 03:29 PM (GMT)
I write spanish poetry, But I decided to translate one of my poems into english. Tell me your most sincere opinions, plz.
"Lions"
Allmighty kings of the jungle,
Inspirators for people,
Great rulers of the Jungle and their animals,
Roar with pride!!
Roar with all your strenght!
Powerful animals of great Inspiration!
Roar! Roar! Roar and Spread your fire!
Powerful felines of Great fire
Roar!!
Great hunters of Strenght
Great pioners of the Jungles
ROAR!!
Roar with all of your strenght all mighty lions!
Roar and run towards your freedom!
Roar and run from The blood stained hands of the Humans!
Escape, roar!!
Great allmighty lions..
Apollo - February 19, 2005 03:32 PM (GMT)
Maybe you could post the original versions of the poems and then translate them. =) I'd like to see them in the language they were written.
Destroyer Angel - February 20, 2005 06:22 PM (GMT)
-Claps-Very good Gabe.Me like!
Kamen rider - February 25, 2005 02:05 PM (GMT)
Elevate - March 1, 2005 03:58 AM (GMT)
Hey i hate poems and this one was pretty good, nothing out of the world but not bad at all, goodjob man keep it up:)
Kamen rider - March 1, 2005 03:18 PM (GMT)
Why you hate poetry, D-12? Poetry is beautiful
Elevate - March 1, 2005 11:34 PM (GMT)