Title: Why Da Fuck?! My Baby Do Me Like He Do?!
Description: A Nesha And Monique Story..
Description: A Nesha And Monique Story..
Monique30815 - May 31, 2005 08:50 AM (GMT)
Why Da Fuck?! My Baby Do Me Like He The Fuck He Do?!
Chapter 1: Not Only I…
At Monique’s House….
Monique-As I was sittin in my room, I noticed I was the one in the room alone… Darkness and Tears were the only thing that was happenin at this time of moment…I loved- LOVE Dustin Breeding….We been goin together for 6 years….You do the math, We started going out at the age of 13….Yea, my daddy whooped my ass the first time he found out that I was in love with a 14 year old…My Mom didn’t mind.. She said it was cute and he was a nice boy…But what happened?? WHY ME GOD? He was the most sweetest guy. MAINLEY, he was the only boy I went with really… I never had no one care about me so much that its been 6 years…No cheatin.. No lyin… No opposite of right… Yea he was faithful to me.. But now, he beats the shit out of me like im some damn vegetarian person who cant feel or anything… Today, He got mad cause I wasn’t home when he called me… He said that I can get hurt or some kind of bull at night outs…. He beat me so abusive that I had to cough blood on his new air forces for him to stop! God give me a sign…Just give me a sign…(cries)
At Nesha’s Apartment….
The reason why she is havin a point of view is cause she was in the kitchen cookin breakfast and was watchin Maury and this girl named Alazay pretty Spanish light skinned girl was on there telling Maury about her boyfriend Taz who was always beatin on her for stupid reasons….
Maury- We are here today for Alazay (camera points to Alazay for a quick 5 seconds) She says that she gets brutally beatings by her boyfriend... Tell us about your situation...
(Audience-Gasps)
Alazay- Well, Taz and I been together for 2 and a half months now and we moved in together and everything…But now, he drinks and get violent…
Audience lady 1- LAWD JESUS BLESS HUR!!!
Just then when Nesha was puttin the pan on the stove on a higher level she had sat down and watch as Alazay was tellin National Tv about her life of bein abused. She thought about herself and Anthony aka. Spectacular
Nesha P.O.V.
Damn, this girl is really like me, shes in the situation im in… Maybe I should be on there…(thinks for a minute).. HELL NAW Anthony would whoop my ass if he had to be known that he was ganna be on tv.. My momma would want me to move back with her… God Knows im sick of cleanin that damn house up…I mean I gotta stay clean.. But DAYUM can a bitch get some peace to herself? Anywayz… Me and Anthony been together for like…10 Months… We were ganna get married but something in my heart said no…not now. I mean I was 17 when he purposed so of course I was ganna say no.. But im sorta happy I said no. Cause I mean he whoops my ass like im so damn Barbie doll.
End P.O.V
Nesha (sniffs the air) – Da hell is that smell (looks around sniffin) smells like…beacon… OH SHIT THE BEACONS ON FIRE!!!
Nesha ran (she was on the track team) and ran for a measuring cup of water and splashed it on the pan.. You threw the pan in the sink and put the water on runnin on it standin over it breathin hard from panicin… Nesha turned around to clean up her mess until
BOOM!
Anthony had punched her dead in the nose and she fell to the ground not knowin what happened.
Anthony-Get yo ass up! Fuck wrong wit you! Tryna burn MY house down?
Anthony kicked her in the stomach, Nesha couldn’t do nothing but just lay there and feel the pain run up threw her chest. Anthony took her right leg and dragged her weak body in the bedroom down the hall. Nesha looked around and everything was blurry and why everything was movin. She looked down and noticed Anthony was draggin her with a trail of blood behind on the white carpet.
Anthony- Ganna try to burn my god damn house up (talking to his self) *he high*
Nesha- Please….(weak voice) Anthony, baby please just stop…
Anthony brought her in the room and closed the door
Anthony- You want fuckin beacon… I’ll give you beacon….
As Anthony said that he unzipped his pants pulled nesha’s pants off and panties off and threw her little body on the bed.
Anthony- Heres your breakfast baby doll!
He thrust his dick into her as hard as he could and slappin her soft face side to side every time he go in!
Nesha had the strength and was able to scream just for a few seconds…
Nesha- SSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Scream)
Anthony stopped for a minute and looked at her in the most saddest way with his soft brown bed room eyes and his lips in her face.
Nesha-(cries) Please…baby st-stop…
Anthony- BITCH HELL NAW YOU WANNA BURN MY DAMN HOUSE DOWN?? IMMA LIGHT DEM THIGHS! (He thrust so hard that her body was liftin off the bed 1 inch.
Nesha just gave up and let him do it… She was too scared to say anything anyway…
Anthony wasn’t still done and it was 16 mins later… This boy aint no one minute man. He was moanin and all still slappin her till the door bell rung..
He got off of her and pulled his pants up and ripped her shirt off and tore it and used the clean part to wipe the sweat off of his head…
Then he took and dragged your body in the bathroom and just layed you there and locked the room up and closed the door. Then he cleaned up the bed room and cleaned up the room
Anthony- (sayin to his self) ill clean this damn blood up fuckin later…shit…
He walked to the door that was bangin and ringin constantly…
Man- MAN DAYUM WHAT YOU DOIN IN THERE???
Anthony- (opening the door) Da Hell wrong wit you bangin on my dayum door? You tryna tear down my damn door down??
Man- Was the pussy good or something? Nigga let me in this house shit! (pushed him out the way and walked in)
Anthony- Dustin man come on…I gotta sleep im tired…
Dustin- What the hell is that on yo pants??? Blood???
Anthony- (looked down in silence) Oh naw….thats….(playin it off and pulls on his pants to get a better look hear racin too) that…some of that damn shit nesha cooked that shit you cook wit the meat and ketchup on top…
Dustin- You bout a dumb ass.. MEAT LOAF??!?!
Anthony- Yea! That shit!
Dustin- Oh.. Let me have some!
Anthony- Too late looks like me and my pants ate it (smiles)
Dustin- Man ya’ll got something in this damn frige…(looks in)
Dustin smelt something like a burnts smell in the kitchen as he walked in.
Dustin- AYO ANT WHAT THE HELL I TOLD YOU ABOUT TRYNA HOME COOK MAN?
Anthony- (in the other room goin in nesha’s pants to get money out and found 50 dollars and took it) NIGGA SHUT UP AND EAT WHAT YOU SEE
Dustin- Shouldn’t of never said that YYYEEAAA!! *smiling takin out the last steak in the fridge*
Anthony walkin in the kitchen with air freshener…-Why You eatin my- never mind just enjoy..
Dustin- I will…(eatin and smilin walkin in the other room lookin down) dayum! Yo floor matches my new red spot on my air forces! (the red spot on his air forces were from Monique when she had got beated on..he aint clean them shoes yet!
Chapter 1: Not Only I…
At Monique’s House….
Monique-As I was sittin in my room, I noticed I was the one in the room alone… Darkness and Tears were the only thing that was happenin at this time of moment…I loved- LOVE Dustin Breeding….We been goin together for 6 years….You do the math, We started going out at the age of 13….Yea, my daddy whooped my ass the first time he found out that I was in love with a 14 year old…My Mom didn’t mind.. She said it was cute and he was a nice boy…But what happened?? WHY ME GOD? He was the most sweetest guy. MAINLEY, he was the only boy I went with really… I never had no one care about me so much that its been 6 years…No cheatin.. No lyin… No opposite of right… Yea he was faithful to me.. But now, he beats the shit out of me like im some damn vegetarian person who cant feel or anything… Today, He got mad cause I wasn’t home when he called me… He said that I can get hurt or some kind of bull at night outs…. He beat me so abusive that I had to cough blood on his new air forces for him to stop! God give me a sign…Just give me a sign…(cries)
At Nesha’s Apartment….
The reason why she is havin a point of view is cause she was in the kitchen cookin breakfast and was watchin Maury and this girl named Alazay pretty Spanish light skinned girl was on there telling Maury about her boyfriend Taz who was always beatin on her for stupid reasons….
Maury- We are here today for Alazay (camera points to Alazay for a quick 5 seconds) She says that she gets brutally beatings by her boyfriend... Tell us about your situation...
(Audience-Gasps)
Alazay- Well, Taz and I been together for 2 and a half months now and we moved in together and everything…But now, he drinks and get violent…
Audience lady 1- LAWD JESUS BLESS HUR!!!
Just then when Nesha was puttin the pan on the stove on a higher level she had sat down and watch as Alazay was tellin National Tv about her life of bein abused. She thought about herself and Anthony aka. Spectacular
Nesha P.O.V.
Damn, this girl is really like me, shes in the situation im in… Maybe I should be on there…(thinks for a minute).. HELL NAW Anthony would whoop my ass if he had to be known that he was ganna be on tv.. My momma would want me to move back with her… God Knows im sick of cleanin that damn house up…I mean I gotta stay clean.. But DAYUM can a bitch get some peace to herself? Anywayz… Me and Anthony been together for like…10 Months… We were ganna get married but something in my heart said no…not now. I mean I was 17 when he purposed so of course I was ganna say no.. But im sorta happy I said no. Cause I mean he whoops my ass like im so damn Barbie doll.
End P.O.V
Nesha (sniffs the air) – Da hell is that smell (looks around sniffin) smells like…beacon… OH SHIT THE BEACONS ON FIRE!!!
Nesha ran (she was on the track team) and ran for a measuring cup of water and splashed it on the pan.. You threw the pan in the sink and put the water on runnin on it standin over it breathin hard from panicin… Nesha turned around to clean up her mess until
BOOM!
Anthony had punched her dead in the nose and she fell to the ground not knowin what happened.
Anthony-Get yo ass up! Fuck wrong wit you! Tryna burn MY house down?
Anthony kicked her in the stomach, Nesha couldn’t do nothing but just lay there and feel the pain run up threw her chest. Anthony took her right leg and dragged her weak body in the bedroom down the hall. Nesha looked around and everything was blurry and why everything was movin. She looked down and noticed Anthony was draggin her with a trail of blood behind on the white carpet.
Anthony- Ganna try to burn my god damn house up (talking to his self) *he high*
Nesha- Please….(weak voice) Anthony, baby please just stop…
Anthony brought her in the room and closed the door
Anthony- You want fuckin beacon… I’ll give you beacon….
As Anthony said that he unzipped his pants pulled nesha’s pants off and panties off and threw her little body on the bed.
Anthony- Heres your breakfast baby doll!
He thrust his dick into her as hard as he could and slappin her soft face side to side every time he go in!
Nesha had the strength and was able to scream just for a few seconds…
Nesha- SSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Scream)
Anthony stopped for a minute and looked at her in the most saddest way with his soft brown bed room eyes and his lips in her face.
Nesha-(cries) Please…baby st-stop…
Anthony- BITCH HELL NAW YOU WANNA BURN MY DAMN HOUSE DOWN?? IMMA LIGHT DEM THIGHS! (He thrust so hard that her body was liftin off the bed 1 inch.
Nesha just gave up and let him do it… She was too scared to say anything anyway…
Anthony wasn’t still done and it was 16 mins later… This boy aint no one minute man. He was moanin and all still slappin her till the door bell rung..
He got off of her and pulled his pants up and ripped her shirt off and tore it and used the clean part to wipe the sweat off of his head…
Then he took and dragged your body in the bathroom and just layed you there and locked the room up and closed the door. Then he cleaned up the bed room and cleaned up the room
Anthony- (sayin to his self) ill clean this damn blood up fuckin later…shit…
He walked to the door that was bangin and ringin constantly…
Man- MAN DAYUM WHAT YOU DOIN IN THERE???
Anthony- (opening the door) Da Hell wrong wit you bangin on my dayum door? You tryna tear down my damn door down??
Man- Was the pussy good or something? Nigga let me in this house shit! (pushed him out the way and walked in)
Anthony- Dustin man come on…I gotta sleep im tired…
Dustin- What the hell is that on yo pants??? Blood???
Anthony- (looked down in silence) Oh naw….thats….(playin it off and pulls on his pants to get a better look hear racin too) that…some of that damn shit nesha cooked that shit you cook wit the meat and ketchup on top…
Dustin- You bout a dumb ass.. MEAT LOAF??!?!
Anthony- Yea! That shit!
Dustin- Oh.. Let me have some!
Anthony- Too late looks like me and my pants ate it (smiles)
Dustin- Man ya’ll got something in this damn frige…(looks in)
Dustin smelt something like a burnts smell in the kitchen as he walked in.
Dustin- AYO ANT WHAT THE HELL I TOLD YOU ABOUT TRYNA HOME COOK MAN?
Anthony- (in the other room goin in nesha’s pants to get money out and found 50 dollars and took it) NIGGA SHUT UP AND EAT WHAT YOU SEE
Dustin- Shouldn’t of never said that YYYEEAAA!! *smiling takin out the last steak in the fridge*
Anthony walkin in the kitchen with air freshener…-Why You eatin my- never mind just enjoy..
Dustin- I will…(eatin and smilin walkin in the other room lookin down) dayum! Yo floor matches my new red spot on my air forces! (the red spot on his air forces were from Monique when she had got beated on..he aint clean them shoes yet!
//:*Sw33tCraziiDym3*:\\ - May 31, 2005 01:00 PM (GMT)
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Druex's BabyBoo - May 31, 2005 03:14 PM (GMT)
dayum....shit I couldn't let no nigga hit on me like that shit I would beat his ass.....
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but bump this shit .....BUMP BUMP...if you need anybody holla
Monique30815 - May 31, 2005 04:36 PM (GMT)
Dustin- Shouldn’t of never said that YYYEEAAA!! *smiling takin out the last steak in the fridge*
Anthony walkin in the kitchen with air freshener…-Why You eatin my- never mind just enjoy..
Dustin- I will…(eatin and smilin walkin in the other room lookin down) dayum! Yo floor matches my new red spot on my air forces! (the red spot on his air forces were from Monique when she had got beated on..he aint clean them shoes yet!
Anthony came over to the white carpet where Dustin was…
Dustin- Damn…You beat that ass good dawg? (flopped on the couch)
Anthony- Naw man…I told you its that damn meat loaf, The ketchup went everywhere man you should see it…
Dustin- Well…I gotta Piss…..
Anthony- Not Here…Nesha showerin…
Dustin- I don’t hear no damn water…
Anthony- Wash Up!
Dustin- Lier
Anthony- NIGGA YOU WANNA PISS HERES A CUP!
Dustin-(looked at it) see my dick will fill the hole cup up…there wont be no room for it to piss.
Anthony- Man go in the bushes!
Dustin- Man…*walkes by the bathroom door* (knockes on it lightly) Nesha???
Nesha was in the bathroom and herd the knocked and weakly opened her eyes and herd Dustins soft voice.
Dustin- Ant what she doin?? I don’t hear nothing…She iight?
Anthony-*keeping his eyes on the tv screen* yea…
Dustin-NESHA!!!
Nesha- (got up off the floor and stood up and fell again from loosin her balance)
Dustin tried to open the door but it was locked
Dustin- Nesha….open the door
Nesha was ganna unlock it…once she touched the door knob she had flashbacks of what happened…
Nesha- Im showerin sorry cant open the door
Dustin- C’mon…I need ta piss
Nesha- (cracked the door and looked at dustin) sorry this body is only for Anthony to see so either you….go home and piss at yo house… or you can do some Niagra Falls shit in the backyard with my dog Blackey? Which one is it?? (smiling)
Dustin- you know that dog don’t like me…C’mon
Nesha- Im sorry then you can go home then
She closed the door and looked into the mirror and saw her body brused…whipped…bloody…and it was in so much pain! She got closer and saw that her face was cutted up and her hair had all this blood in it.. She ran to the toilet and threw up and wondered why her thighs were hurtin so bad to the inside of her tissue down there…she looked down and saw that there was blood commin threw… she started to cry and slid down the wall…
Dustin- Yo man why she cryin??
Anthony- You know how girls get when they period on and crampin…(soundin like a girl) Why now??? Its not suppose to be on?? The cramps are killin me!
Dustin- Man You sick!
Nesha got into the shower and took her a long shower…you know them showers you take when you think about stuff and all and be in there for like hours…
Nesha got out the shower few hours later and dried off and looked at her naked body and wondered why she was in this predicament.. She remembered her sister sayin if She needed her to call her… so she putted on her clothes and put her hair in a swooped ponytail and sun glasses and to hide SOME of the bruises and a jacket. She went in the bed room and cleaned it up and then got her cell, car keys and then…
Anthony- Where The fuck you goin?
Nesha- Out
Anthony- Out Where?
Nesha- Out….Side…..
Anthony- Be Gone…*flicked his hands like she was a fly*
Nesha walked out…
Dustin- If You was to treat me like that I woulda whooped yo natural black ass!
Anthony- Well…Im Daddy!
They herd a car start up… Anthony ran outside and screamed nesha name to stop the car but nesha stepped on the gas and backed out the car and drove off to her mom house…She pulled up in the drive way and reached in her purse to get her 50 dollars out but came to realized that it wasn’t in there…
Nesha- THAT BITCH ALWAYS TAKEN MY STUFF!!! AHHHH!!!! *screams*
Knock on the window
Nesha rolled it down only to show her sunglasses…
Mom- What the hell is wrong wit you screamin in the white neighbor hood? Girl you want yo poor mamma to get put out?
Nesha looked straight at the steerin wheel…
Nesha- No ma’m
Mom- Iight then come give yo momma some suga and a hug
Nesha got out the car and gave her hug.. as her momma patted her back nesha tried not to jump cause her mom was hittin the wounds that seem to burn like they were on fire…
Mom- Why you got this jacket on as hot as it is??? You ganna get a strake!
Nesha- Stroke momma
Mom- You know it baby! Take that jacket off girl!
Nesha took it off and her mom mouth dropped and her hand suddenly covered it.
Mom- Don’t tell me that damn piss tail boy did this to you!
Dad- What the hell that big nose fucker did to you?
Nesha- Noth-
Mom- LOOK AT THIS DONALD! THESE CUTS!
Dad- Why the hell that damn Garfield snot nose boy do that to you?
Nesha- He didn’t do noth—
Mom- See This is why you need to move back in wit me! You ganna get killed messin wit him!
Dad- Fuck this!
Mom- Donald where the hell you goin?
Dad- Imma go get my damn shot gun so I can buss a cap in his big ass!
Mom- GET MINE TOO!
Nesha- MOMMA STOP!!
Mom- Why?
Nesha- I can handle it…I…I have it all under control…
Mom P.O.V
When she had shit under control? If she did she wouldn’t of got all these damn cuts on her back!
End P.o.v
Nesha- Mom I know what I’m doi—
Dad- FUCK DIS SHIT IM GONE!
Her dad got in the car and threw the two shot guns in the other seat and drove to Anthony house
Nesha- DAD NO!
Mom- come on in this house I can give you some alcohol…
Nesha-mom no its ganna burn
Mom- Oooo I thought you had this shit under control hmm??
Silence….
Mom- GET YO ASS OVER HERE AND GET THIS DAMN ALCOHOL BATH!
Nesha P.O.V
I knew I shoulda went to my sister house…
End P.O.V
Nesha pulled her clothes off and slowly got in the bath….
Mom- Don’t take all day Nesha just get yo butt in there it aint ganna burn….
Nesha got in and sat down and got teary from all the pain that was rushin in…
Mom- mmhmm…let it get between yo legs too now… don’t let it miss a spot…
Nesha opened her legs and started screamin…
Mom- Girl ooooo He ripped yo vagina!! You betta go to the doctor for that…
Nesha- MOMMA IT BURNS!
Mom- I know it does! That’s what it suppose to do child! He tore your tissue on your vagina..
For the people who don’t know…
When Anthony had “raped” Nesha , her walls were too small for his cause a little and while he thrust it in instead of him goin in slowly to open the walls a little bit more he forced it in so hard he ripped the tissue..
Anthony walkin in the kitchen with air freshener…-Why You eatin my- never mind just enjoy..
Dustin- I will…(eatin and smilin walkin in the other room lookin down) dayum! Yo floor matches my new red spot on my air forces! (the red spot on his air forces were from Monique when she had got beated on..he aint clean them shoes yet!
Anthony came over to the white carpet where Dustin was…
Dustin- Damn…You beat that ass good dawg? (flopped on the couch)
Anthony- Naw man…I told you its that damn meat loaf, The ketchup went everywhere man you should see it…
Dustin- Well…I gotta Piss…..
Anthony- Not Here…Nesha showerin…
Dustin- I don’t hear no damn water…
Anthony- Wash Up!
Dustin- Lier
Anthony- NIGGA YOU WANNA PISS HERES A CUP!
Dustin-(looked at it) see my dick will fill the hole cup up…there wont be no room for it to piss.
Anthony- Man go in the bushes!
Dustin- Man…*walkes by the bathroom door* (knockes on it lightly) Nesha???
Nesha was in the bathroom and herd the knocked and weakly opened her eyes and herd Dustins soft voice.
Dustin- Ant what she doin?? I don’t hear nothing…She iight?
Anthony-*keeping his eyes on the tv screen* yea…
Dustin-NESHA!!!
Nesha- (got up off the floor and stood up and fell again from loosin her balance)
Dustin tried to open the door but it was locked
Dustin- Nesha….open the door
Nesha was ganna unlock it…once she touched the door knob she had flashbacks of what happened…
Nesha- Im showerin sorry cant open the door
Dustin- C’mon…I need ta piss
Nesha- (cracked the door and looked at dustin) sorry this body is only for Anthony to see so either you….go home and piss at yo house… or you can do some Niagra Falls shit in the backyard with my dog Blackey? Which one is it?? (smiling)
Dustin- you know that dog don’t like me…C’mon
Nesha- Im sorry then you can go home then
She closed the door and looked into the mirror and saw her body brused…whipped…bloody…and it was in so much pain! She got closer and saw that her face was cutted up and her hair had all this blood in it.. She ran to the toilet and threw up and wondered why her thighs were hurtin so bad to the inside of her tissue down there…she looked down and saw that there was blood commin threw… she started to cry and slid down the wall…
Dustin- Yo man why she cryin??
Anthony- You know how girls get when they period on and crampin…(soundin like a girl) Why now??? Its not suppose to be on?? The cramps are killin me!
Dustin- Man You sick!
Nesha got into the shower and took her a long shower…you know them showers you take when you think about stuff and all and be in there for like hours…
Nesha got out the shower few hours later and dried off and looked at her naked body and wondered why she was in this predicament.. She remembered her sister sayin if She needed her to call her… so she putted on her clothes and put her hair in a swooped ponytail and sun glasses and to hide SOME of the bruises and a jacket. She went in the bed room and cleaned it up and then got her cell, car keys and then…
Anthony- Where The fuck you goin?
Nesha- Out
Anthony- Out Where?
Nesha- Out….Side…..
Anthony- Be Gone…*flicked his hands like she was a fly*
Nesha walked out…
Dustin- If You was to treat me like that I woulda whooped yo natural black ass!
Anthony- Well…Im Daddy!
They herd a car start up… Anthony ran outside and screamed nesha name to stop the car but nesha stepped on the gas and backed out the car and drove off to her mom house…She pulled up in the drive way and reached in her purse to get her 50 dollars out but came to realized that it wasn’t in there…
Nesha- THAT BITCH ALWAYS TAKEN MY STUFF!!! AHHHH!!!! *screams*
Knock on the window
Nesha rolled it down only to show her sunglasses…
Mom- What the hell is wrong wit you screamin in the white neighbor hood? Girl you want yo poor mamma to get put out?
Nesha looked straight at the steerin wheel…
Nesha- No ma’m
Mom- Iight then come give yo momma some suga and a hug
Nesha got out the car and gave her hug.. as her momma patted her back nesha tried not to jump cause her mom was hittin the wounds that seem to burn like they were on fire…
Mom- Why you got this jacket on as hot as it is??? You ganna get a strake!
Nesha- Stroke momma
Mom- You know it baby! Take that jacket off girl!
Nesha took it off and her mom mouth dropped and her hand suddenly covered it.
Mom- Don’t tell me that damn piss tail boy did this to you!
Dad- What the hell that big nose fucker did to you?
Nesha- Noth-
Mom- LOOK AT THIS DONALD! THESE CUTS!
Dad- Why the hell that damn Garfield snot nose boy do that to you?
Nesha- He didn’t do noth—
Mom- See This is why you need to move back in wit me! You ganna get killed messin wit him!
Dad- Fuck this!
Mom- Donald where the hell you goin?
Dad- Imma go get my damn shot gun so I can buss a cap in his big ass!
Mom- GET MINE TOO!
Nesha- MOMMA STOP!!
Mom- Why?
Nesha- I can handle it…I…I have it all under control…
Mom P.O.V
When she had shit under control? If she did she wouldn’t of got all these damn cuts on her back!
End P.o.v
Nesha- Mom I know what I’m doi—
Dad- FUCK DIS SHIT IM GONE!
Her dad got in the car and threw the two shot guns in the other seat and drove to Anthony house
Nesha- DAD NO!
Mom- come on in this house I can give you some alcohol…
Nesha-mom no its ganna burn
Mom- Oooo I thought you had this shit under control hmm??
Silence….
Mom- GET YO ASS OVER HERE AND GET THIS DAMN ALCOHOL BATH!
Nesha P.O.V
I knew I shoulda went to my sister house…
End P.O.V
Nesha pulled her clothes off and slowly got in the bath….
Mom- Don’t take all day Nesha just get yo butt in there it aint ganna burn….
Nesha got in and sat down and got teary from all the pain that was rushin in…
Mom- mmhmm…let it get between yo legs too now… don’t let it miss a spot…
Nesha opened her legs and started screamin…
Mom- Girl ooooo He ripped yo vagina!! You betta go to the doctor for that…
Nesha- MOMMA IT BURNS!
Mom- I know it does! That’s what it suppose to do child! He tore your tissue on your vagina..
For the people who don’t know…
When Anthony had “raped” Nesha , her walls were too small for his cause a little and while he thrust it in instead of him goin in slowly to open the walls a little bit more he forced it in so hard he ripped the tissue..
Druex's BabyBoo - May 31, 2005 05:11 PM (GMT)
ooooooooooh hell motherfucking nah....he took the coochie that she aint want to give him..... come to find out he rips it to......BUMP BUMP BUMP this shit gurl ......I hope
he get his ass beat....... i would do it my self :: starts mumbling::
he get his ass beat....... i would do it my self :: starts mumbling::
Monique30815 - May 31, 2005 07:19 PM (GMT)
Mom- Get out the bath tub before it gets worse...shit…
Nesha got out slowly out tryin not to move her legs a lot cause of the rippin of her tissue would hurt if she moved her legs or anything down there…
Mom- we ganna go take you to the hospital…get that shit checked
Nesha got ready and took long minutes to get into the car as they were in the car and drove to the hospital they talked….
Mom- Nesha what the hell happened??
Nesha didn’t say nothing
Mom- Do You need me to talk to Anthony??
Nesha- No mom
Mom- Then tell me what happened! (swerved on the street for a minute)
Nesha- He had…..he…(she didn’t know how to say it)….he had sex with me..
Mom- I call it damn rape!
Nesha- No mom we just had sex and he just forced it in too fast…
Mom (stopped the car)- You lyin to me nesha???
Nesha started to get teary but looked into the window to not show it.
Mom- DONESHA NICOLE EVANS ARE YOU ANSWERIN ME WITH A LIE??
Nesha- No mom
Mom- Iight…you ganna regret that (started to drive and find a parkin space) you ganna mess around and find yo self lookin at your body on the death bed…
Nesha- Mom I can handle this..
Mom- IF YOU CAN HANDLE IT WHY YOU GOT YO SHIT TORN UP??
Nesha started cryin…
Mom- Them damn tears don’t work with me…So Suck That Shit Up!
Nesha just kept lookin out the window
Mom- CANT FIND A DAMN PARK SPACE IN THIS DAMN PLACE WHATS GOIN ON?? SHIT!...fuck it ill just get a damn ticket (she parked in the handicapped part)
Nesha- Mom it’s a parkin spac—
Mom- SHUT UP! U BETTA BE LUCKY IM GETTING YOU IN HERE YOU CANT WALK ANYWAYS
Nesha and her mom got out and slowly walked in the hospital…
Mom-(talking to the lady at the counter)Umm excuse me but who should I go see about a torn tissues??
Lady-what kind of tissues u taking about ma’m??
Mom-Vagina tissue…(the lady had glanced at the mama)Not me…
The lady rolled her eyes….
Lady-You should see……Dr. Tommy D. Taylor…room 941…
Mom-ok thank you…(talking to Nesha)Let’s go…(so they went into the room)
With Monique and Dustin
At The Store….
Dustin-Ay go get me some strawberries and hurry up too…..
Monique-Hell no you get it yo self…u got legs so go get it, it’s nothing but two aisles away..
Dustin-Ay man who the Fuck u talking to like that????
Monique-Shit u the only one around aint u??
Dustin- Keep talking shit that’s all I’ma say..
Monique-So what the fuck u gone do???
Dustin-Oh so u wanna talk shit since we in the store??? You don’t be doing that shit when we at home so u bett-----(got cut off)
Monique-Aint nobody scared of you Dustin so get that to your THICK head….
As they were arguing a light skin boy walked up to them and said,
Boy-excuse me…
Dustin-what man?? Don’t u see me talking to my gurl??
Boy-man all I said was excuse me cause ya’ll in the way and I need to get the cake mix for my little sister’s birthday party..
So Dustin had turned around and got some cake mix and threw it at him…
Dustin-Here take this and be happy. You got your cake mix now be gone…
Monique-Man Dustin shut the fuck up you don’t know what he want on the cake so let him pick it his self…
Just then Dustin had pushed her into the rack and said,
Dustin-Man im tired of you talking shit to me in public all the time thinking you hard and shit u need to calm that shit down before I slap the shit outta you..
Monique-You ain’t gone do shit!!!
After she said that, Dustin slapped the mess out of her, that she fell to the ground..
Boy-Ay man u need to clam down on that shit u don’t hit no gurl like that..
Dustin-(gets in the boy face)You wanna fuck with me too??
Just then a group of boys appeared behind the boy’s back obviously he must have had friends that work at the store. Dustin started getting scared until he realized he’s in public. Then Monique got up and took the eggs and threw it at him..
Monique- Now what BITCH WHAT THE FUCK YOU GONE DO NOW HUH?!?!?(she started pushing him until, BOOM!!!!! He punched the shit outta her)
Dustin-Man shut the fuck up…..SHIT!!!(he started kicking her in the stomach until the boy had grabbed him by the shirt and threw him on the rack and started beating the shit outta him and then the rest of the boys started stomping him out, just then the manager came out and said,)
Manager-WHAT THE FUCK GOING ON ?!?!?(just then everybody stopped what they was doing and looked at him)WHAT YA’LL JUST GOT UP THIS MORNING AND SAID WELL HOW ABOUT WE FUCK UP HIS STORE TODAY OR SOME SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELL NO, WHO’S GONNA CLEAN THIS SHIT UP?!?!(aint nobody said nothing.. Monique got up and said,)
Monique-Sir I’m sorry for----
Manager-GET OUTTA MY DAMN STO—EVRYBODY JUST GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY STORE BEFORE I GET UGLY!!!!!
(little in his face)
little kid-But sir u already ugly…
Manager-GO SIT DOWN SOME WHERE SUGAR SPICE!!
Little kid-(ghetto voice)THE NAMES TABASCO IIGHT, U BETTA RECOGNIZE!!!
Nesha got out slowly out tryin not to move her legs a lot cause of the rippin of her tissue would hurt if she moved her legs or anything down there…
Mom- we ganna go take you to the hospital…get that shit checked
Nesha got ready and took long minutes to get into the car as they were in the car and drove to the hospital they talked….
Mom- Nesha what the hell happened??
Nesha didn’t say nothing
Mom- Do You need me to talk to Anthony??
Nesha- No mom
Mom- Then tell me what happened! (swerved on the street for a minute)
Nesha- He had…..he…(she didn’t know how to say it)….he had sex with me..
Mom- I call it damn rape!
Nesha- No mom we just had sex and he just forced it in too fast…
Mom (stopped the car)- You lyin to me nesha???
Nesha started to get teary but looked into the window to not show it.
Mom- DONESHA NICOLE EVANS ARE YOU ANSWERIN ME WITH A LIE??
Nesha- No mom
Mom- Iight…you ganna regret that (started to drive and find a parkin space) you ganna mess around and find yo self lookin at your body on the death bed…
Nesha- Mom I can handle this..
Mom- IF YOU CAN HANDLE IT WHY YOU GOT YO SHIT TORN UP??
Nesha started cryin…
Mom- Them damn tears don’t work with me…So Suck That Shit Up!
Nesha just kept lookin out the window
Mom- CANT FIND A DAMN PARK SPACE IN THIS DAMN PLACE WHATS GOIN ON?? SHIT!...fuck it ill just get a damn ticket (she parked in the handicapped part)
Nesha- Mom it’s a parkin spac—
Mom- SHUT UP! U BETTA BE LUCKY IM GETTING YOU IN HERE YOU CANT WALK ANYWAYS
Nesha and her mom got out and slowly walked in the hospital…
Mom-(talking to the lady at the counter)Umm excuse me but who should I go see about a torn tissues??
Lady-what kind of tissues u taking about ma’m??
Mom-Vagina tissue…(the lady had glanced at the mama)Not me…
The lady rolled her eyes….
Lady-You should see……Dr. Tommy D. Taylor…room 941…
Mom-ok thank you…(talking to Nesha)Let’s go…(so they went into the room)
With Monique and Dustin
At The Store….
Dustin-Ay go get me some strawberries and hurry up too…..
Monique-Hell no you get it yo self…u got legs so go get it, it’s nothing but two aisles away..
Dustin-Ay man who the Fuck u talking to like that????
Monique-Shit u the only one around aint u??
Dustin- Keep talking shit that’s all I’ma say..
Monique-So what the fuck u gone do???
Dustin-Oh so u wanna talk shit since we in the store??? You don’t be doing that shit when we at home so u bett-----(got cut off)
Monique-Aint nobody scared of you Dustin so get that to your THICK head….
As they were arguing a light skin boy walked up to them and said,
Boy-excuse me…
Dustin-what man?? Don’t u see me talking to my gurl??
Boy-man all I said was excuse me cause ya’ll in the way and I need to get the cake mix for my little sister’s birthday party..
So Dustin had turned around and got some cake mix and threw it at him…
Dustin-Here take this and be happy. You got your cake mix now be gone…
Monique-Man Dustin shut the fuck up you don’t know what he want on the cake so let him pick it his self…
Just then Dustin had pushed her into the rack and said,
Dustin-Man im tired of you talking shit to me in public all the time thinking you hard and shit u need to calm that shit down before I slap the shit outta you..
Monique-You ain’t gone do shit!!!
After she said that, Dustin slapped the mess out of her, that she fell to the ground..
Boy-Ay man u need to clam down on that shit u don’t hit no gurl like that..
Dustin-(gets in the boy face)You wanna fuck with me too??
Just then a group of boys appeared behind the boy’s back obviously he must have had friends that work at the store. Dustin started getting scared until he realized he’s in public. Then Monique got up and took the eggs and threw it at him..
Monique- Now what BITCH WHAT THE FUCK YOU GONE DO NOW HUH?!?!?(she started pushing him until, BOOM!!!!! He punched the shit outta her)
Dustin-Man shut the fuck up…..SHIT!!!(he started kicking her in the stomach until the boy had grabbed him by the shirt and threw him on the rack and started beating the shit outta him and then the rest of the boys started stomping him out, just then the manager came out and said,)
Manager-WHAT THE FUCK GOING ON ?!?!?(just then everybody stopped what they was doing and looked at him)WHAT YA’LL JUST GOT UP THIS MORNING AND SAID WELL HOW ABOUT WE FUCK UP HIS STORE TODAY OR SOME SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HELL NO, WHO’S GONNA CLEAN THIS SHIT UP?!?!(aint nobody said nothing.. Monique got up and said,)
Monique-Sir I’m sorry for----
Manager-GET OUTTA MY DAMN STO—EVRYBODY JUST GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY STORE BEFORE I GET UGLY!!!!!
(little in his face)
little kid-But sir u already ugly…
Manager-GO SIT DOWN SOME WHERE SUGAR SPICE!!
Little kid-(ghetto voice)THE NAMES TABASCO IIGHT, U BETTA RECOGNIZE!!!
Druex's BabyBoo - May 31, 2005 07:32 PM (GMT)
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Fallen_Yella_Angel998 - June 1, 2005 12:02 AM (GMT)
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Druex's BabyBoo - June 1, 2005 12:08 AM (GMT)
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Monique30815 - June 1, 2005 12:24 AM (GMT)
Thanks ya'll me and donesha got some more for ya!
Little kid-(ghetto voice)THE NAMES TABASCO IIGHT, U BETTA RECOGNIZE!!!
Manager- EVERYONE OUT!!!! NOW!!! YOUR ALL FIRED!!
Boys-Man damn…C’mon man we’ll clean it up…
Manager- You Know what yea…ya’ll clean this up…THEN YOUR FIRED!
Boy 1- That’s ganna give us extra on our paychecks??
Manager- NO! NOW GO CLEAN THIS MESS YA’LL MADE UP!
The light skinned boy walked over to Monique and asked her was she ok and she replied yes, The boy gave her this 7 digit number on a piece of torn cardboard paper on the floor.. It was his number and a name of his at the bottom. “De’Mario”
Monique- had walked to him and tried to give it back…I cant take this Dustin will beat my ass if he saw me callin another boy.
De Mario- Call me whenever you can then (smiled)
Dustin was behind the other Aisle listenin to the hole thing that they were sayin…
Dustin P.O.V
Ooo so this bitch ganna try to cheat on me eh? O ok… Let me catch her ass fuckin callin him…She will get her ass whooped to the damn ground!
End P.O.V.
De- Don’t let him know then (whisper)
Monique- IIght…
Monique P.O.V.
Ill just throw it away when I get home…
End P.O.V
Dustin had finally got home and they were sittin there In silence…
Dustin- Baby im sorry…
Monique- I don’t wanna fuckin here it DUST HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!
Dustin- Monique I’m sorry *got on his knees and kissed her hand* forgive me please?
Monique-No Dustin…No (pulls her hands away) No I want us to be over…You keep hittin me and all this ish… Your not even like the old Dustin I LOVED!
Dustin came up to her and looked into her eyes and seen that she was serious.
Dustin- (sexy voice) let me make it up to you…
Monique- No Dustin….No…
Dustin grabbed her body and kissed her into the room and shut the door…
It was dark, Monique had tried to look and see where he was and some light flashed on him and he had nothin on but some red boxers…
Monique- No Dustin Please…
Dustin walked to the bed and got on top of her and started kissin her…
Monique started to think to herself
Monique P.O.V
WAIT A DAMN MINUTE WHY THE HELL IM CRYIN FUCK THIS
End P.O.V
Monique started kickin and pushin him off but he wouldn’t get her off Dustin had grabbed her hands and pinned her on the bed…
Dustin- Shhhhh…(sexy voice) He started kissin her on the kneck
Monique just gave up and let him get what he wanted…
Dustin got it from the back and the front… And still wasn’t done… he pleasured her too for letting him get it. Its been 1 month since he had got some sex..
Dustin fell on top of her once he had did what he did and rolled over and layed on the bed and went to sleep…
Monique had got up and took a shower. And got in her car and went to go see her cousins… Jarell And Kelt..
Monique Knocked on the door…
Jarell opened the door with nothing on but some thongs on..
Monique- What the hell you got on?!
Jarell- Oh shit! I thought you were tiffany!
Monique- You herd about that new thing they made?? I think its called PEEP HOLE!
Jarell- Man what you want cuz…
Monique- I wanted to see if ya’ll wanted to go to the movies
Jarell- yea…(turns around) AYO KELT YOU WANNA GO TO THE MOVIES!?
Monique (lookin at jarell’s ass)- A tell me this…Is you cold??
Jarell had relized his ass was showin and got a robe and put it on..
Kelt walked up the steps…- At damn 12:06 you wanna go to the damn movies?
Monique- WUR UP!!!!!!
Kelt- wuts up durrg…
Monique- Ya’ll ganna come and see a movie wit me?
Kelt- Why so late man? I got ta work tomorrow..
Jarell- You early bird c’mon man lets go…
They went to the movies and few minutes later they had went to see The Ring 2
Monique, Kelt , Jarell were scared out of their mines watchin till one girl was behind them just talking….
Girl- NOW HOW THE HELL THE BITCH GANNA TRY TA TURN THE TV OFF??
Monique- Jarell…You thirsty??
Jarell- Yea
Monique-Go Get Us Somethin To Drink
Jarell- Man I’m tryna watch the movie
Monique- Please relly??
Jarell- Nigga naw..
Kelt- Shh!!
Girl- RUN BITCH RUN!!!
Kelt- Excuse me, can you hush…?
Girl- Sorry..(smiles)
Monique-Please
Jarell- No
Monique- Fine Ill Get it myself
Jarell- Bring back some skits (skittles) too!
Monique walked out the movie theater and was in line to get somethin to drink and some skits as well.
In the theater room Jarell and Kelt was tryna to enjoy the movie till it was turned out to be that Jarell couldn’t hear the movie cause the damn girl would not hush she kept talkin over it
Girl- OOO I WOULDA WHOOPED HIS ASS IF I FOUND OUT HE WATCHED IT! BETTA YET I WOULD KIK HIS ASS OUTSIDE AND TOLD HIM TO NEVA COME BACK, PUTTIN MY LIFE IN DANGER…SHIII….
Jarell- SHUT….UP! (TURNES AROUND)
Kelt- Man just hush 4real cause you getting on my last nerves.. some people haven’t seen it
Jarell- Man just shut the fuck up!
People- SSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Girl- IIGHT DAMN ILL SHUT UP!
Out side the theater
Lady- Hi! Enjoying Your Movie? (smile)
Monique- Yea…
Lady- That’s great! How may I help you?
Monique- Can I get a X-Large Sprite…and a Small Coke..
Lady- Sure! Will That Be all? (smile)
Monique- And some skittles?
Lady- That will be 8.29 would that be credit or cash?
Monique- Cash… (pulls out the amount of money and gets the stuff)
Lady- Have a nice day and Enjoy your movie! (smile)
Monique walked back in the movie and noticed jarell was fussin at the girl behind the seat
Jarell- I will slap ya and call yo ass suzy!
Girl- YOU AINT GANNA DO NADDA!
Jarell- Don’t make me jump over this chair and slam dunk yo ass in that pop corn bag!
Girl- SHUT UP!
Jarell- You shut up you the one who talking wit that hott ass breath close it! The air on damn!
Girl- Im out!
Jarell- Yea take yo nasty ol paper dickered ass lookin like a smurf ass on!
The girl just walked out and flicked him off
Monique had gave him is drink and burst in wit her big soda!
Jarell looked at monique’s and then his
Jarell- What happened to the rest of my soda?
Monique- Go get it yo self!
Kelt- Mo…can you get me something to drink?
Monique- I aint yo damn maid!
People- SSHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Kelt and Jarell got up and stuck their middle fingers up and mouthed the words…”Fuck all ya’ll”! Monique pulled on jarell’s yellow baggy wind breaker pants and told him to sit down and hold my soda so ill get Kelt one.
Monique walked to the line again and a new girl had helped her..
Lady- *Rolled her eyes at Monique* May I help you?
Monique jerked her head back and looked at her up and down..
Lady- I aint got all day.
Monique P.O.v
She Fuckin wit the wrong muthafucka
End
Monique- Uhuh I want a…shit…what the fuck I want…
Lady- *coughs*
Monique- I want uhh…hm… A X-Large orange soda..
Lady- What else?
Monique- And A large Hi-C
The lady made two of them and right when she bout to tell her, her price Monique had changed the order
Monique- Matta Of Fact, I don’t even want them… I want a hot dog with a X-Large Pepsi
The lady rolled her eyes and breathed hard and made the hot dog and had made the pepsi..
Lady- 4.05
Monique- Aw hell…Hol up gotta find it out my purse…
Monique had pulled her money out and purposely dropped all these pennies up just to waste her time….
Lady- (mumbles) Oh my god….(rollin her eyes)
Monique- If yo Boney ass help me then maybe we wont be standin here all night shit!
Lady just stood there and Monique gave her all these pennies to count and the amount of 3 dollars…
Monique walked away and went into the movie theater and gave kelt his soda and noticed jarell was slobbin all over her soda.
Monique- JARELL WHAT IS YOU DOIN DRINKIN MY SODA??
Jarell- I was thirsty…You might wanna get a refill too…
Monique- I cant Stand you
Jarell- Uhuh..thats nice
The movie was over and finally they all left to go to there cars..
Monique had dropped them off and went home but she left her front door key in the house so she had to go to the back… She opened the door and here dustin moanin…
Monique- Dustin???
Dustin- OOO Kelly!
Monique- What the hell??
Monique had walked by the bed room door and didn’t open it yet till she herd a girl moan Dustins name…
Monique had kicked the door open and looked around and saw some girl on top of dustin.
Monique- WHO THE FUCK IS THIS BITCH?
Dustin- Its not what it looks like
Monique- Its not what it looks like? So I guess im seein some shit off of fear factor or something huh?
Dustin-Baby please listen
Monique- WHY SHOULD I LISTEN? I ALREADY HERD HER MOANIN YO NAME??
The girl- Baby who is she?
Monique looked at the girl and then at Dustin
Monique-IM HIS DAMN BABY GIRL BITCH WHO YOU IS?
Girl- Im his girlfriend
Dustin- Bitch no you aint
Monique- You know what, both of ya’ll just get out of my damn house I PAY THE BILLS ROUND THIS BITCH SO YA’LL 2 MOFO’S CAN GET THE FUCK OUT MY DAMN HOUSE!
Girl- Baby come on
Monique- Bitch! *punches the girl in the face* BABY MY ASS HES MY BABY
Girl- Bitch if he was yo’s why he fuckin this?!
Monique- Cause I wont give it to his ass like you do he gets this every night bitch!
Monique walked over to dustin..
Monique- EVERY FUCKIN NIGHT!
Girl- Well I see I must of fucked him so good that he aint forget this shit yet!
Dustin- Monique lets just go
Monique- NO YOU AND YO HOE GO!
Girl- I aint no hoe!
Monique- Who The one wit out no clothes on?
Silence….
Monique- So back yo damn ass up before you get smacked down iight! Im from fuck Brooklyn You don’t wanna fuck wit a Brooklyn chick!
Girl- Bitch Fuck you!
Monique- Oh I see that job is already taken!
Dustin told the girl to get out the house and so she did
Dustin walked back over to Monique
Dustin- (slapped) WHAT THE FUCK WRONG WIT YOU INTERRUPTIN MY SHIT LIKE THAT???
Monique- INTERRUPTIN??? SO FUCKIN IS INTERRUPTIN?? I BETCHA IF I FUCK AROUND ON YO ASS YOU WILL HAVE A DAMN FIT! BUT LET IT BE ANOTHA BITCH! YOU JUST LET IT GO! *walks off and packs her things*
Dustin- WHERE U GOIN??
Monique just ignored him
Dustin- ASHLEY MONIQUE ALEXANDER WHERE YOU THINK YOU GOIN?!
Monique aint stud him she just got her things and walked off.. until…
BOOM!
(and just to let you know two people are typin this story)
With Nesha
Little kid-(ghetto voice)THE NAMES TABASCO IIGHT, U BETTA RECOGNIZE!!!
Manager- EVERYONE OUT!!!! NOW!!! YOUR ALL FIRED!!
Boys-Man damn…C’mon man we’ll clean it up…
Manager- You Know what yea…ya’ll clean this up…THEN YOUR FIRED!
Boy 1- That’s ganna give us extra on our paychecks??
Manager- NO! NOW GO CLEAN THIS MESS YA’LL MADE UP!
The light skinned boy walked over to Monique and asked her was she ok and she replied yes, The boy gave her this 7 digit number on a piece of torn cardboard paper on the floor.. It was his number and a name of his at the bottom. “De’Mario”
Monique- had walked to him and tried to give it back…I cant take this Dustin will beat my ass if he saw me callin another boy.
De Mario- Call me whenever you can then (smiled)
Dustin was behind the other Aisle listenin to the hole thing that they were sayin…
Dustin P.O.V
Ooo so this bitch ganna try to cheat on me eh? O ok… Let me catch her ass fuckin callin him…She will get her ass whooped to the damn ground!
End P.O.V.
De- Don’t let him know then (whisper)
Monique- IIght…
Monique P.O.V.
Ill just throw it away when I get home…
End P.O.V
Dustin had finally got home and they were sittin there In silence…
Dustin- Baby im sorry…
Monique- I don’t wanna fuckin here it DUST HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?!
Dustin- Monique I’m sorry *got on his knees and kissed her hand* forgive me please?
Monique-No Dustin…No (pulls her hands away) No I want us to be over…You keep hittin me and all this ish… Your not even like the old Dustin I LOVED!
Dustin came up to her and looked into her eyes and seen that she was serious.
Dustin- (sexy voice) let me make it up to you…
Monique- No Dustin….No…
Dustin grabbed her body and kissed her into the room and shut the door…
It was dark, Monique had tried to look and see where he was and some light flashed on him and he had nothin on but some red boxers…
Monique- No Dustin Please…
Dustin walked to the bed and got on top of her and started kissin her…
Monique started to think to herself
Monique P.O.V
WAIT A DAMN MINUTE WHY THE HELL IM CRYIN FUCK THIS
End P.O.V
Monique started kickin and pushin him off but he wouldn’t get her off Dustin had grabbed her hands and pinned her on the bed…
Dustin- Shhhhh…(sexy voice) He started kissin her on the kneck
Monique just gave up and let him get what he wanted…
Dustin got it from the back and the front… And still wasn’t done… he pleasured her too for letting him get it. Its been 1 month since he had got some sex..
Dustin fell on top of her once he had did what he did and rolled over and layed on the bed and went to sleep…
Monique had got up and took a shower. And got in her car and went to go see her cousins… Jarell And Kelt..
Monique Knocked on the door…
Jarell opened the door with nothing on but some thongs on..
Monique- What the hell you got on?!
Jarell- Oh shit! I thought you were tiffany!
Monique- You herd about that new thing they made?? I think its called PEEP HOLE!
Jarell- Man what you want cuz…
Monique- I wanted to see if ya’ll wanted to go to the movies
Jarell- yea…(turns around) AYO KELT YOU WANNA GO TO THE MOVIES!?
Monique (lookin at jarell’s ass)- A tell me this…Is you cold??
Jarell had relized his ass was showin and got a robe and put it on..
Kelt walked up the steps…- At damn 12:06 you wanna go to the damn movies?
Monique- WUR UP!!!!!!
Kelt- wuts up durrg…
Monique- Ya’ll ganna come and see a movie wit me?
Kelt- Why so late man? I got ta work tomorrow..
Jarell- You early bird c’mon man lets go…
They went to the movies and few minutes later they had went to see The Ring 2
Monique, Kelt , Jarell were scared out of their mines watchin till one girl was behind them just talking….
Girl- NOW HOW THE HELL THE BITCH GANNA TRY TA TURN THE TV OFF??
Monique- Jarell…You thirsty??
Jarell- Yea
Monique-Go Get Us Somethin To Drink
Jarell- Man I’m tryna watch the movie
Monique- Please relly??
Jarell- Nigga naw..
Kelt- Shh!!
Girl- RUN BITCH RUN!!!
Kelt- Excuse me, can you hush…?
Girl- Sorry..(smiles)
Monique-Please
Jarell- No
Monique- Fine Ill Get it myself
Jarell- Bring back some skits (skittles) too!
Monique walked out the movie theater and was in line to get somethin to drink and some skits as well.
In the theater room Jarell and Kelt was tryna to enjoy the movie till it was turned out to be that Jarell couldn’t hear the movie cause the damn girl would not hush she kept talkin over it
Girl- OOO I WOULDA WHOOPED HIS ASS IF I FOUND OUT HE WATCHED IT! BETTA YET I WOULD KIK HIS ASS OUTSIDE AND TOLD HIM TO NEVA COME BACK, PUTTIN MY LIFE IN DANGER…SHIII….
Jarell- SHUT….UP! (TURNES AROUND)
Kelt- Man just hush 4real cause you getting on my last nerves.. some people haven’t seen it
Jarell- Man just shut the fuck up!
People- SSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Girl- IIGHT DAMN ILL SHUT UP!
Out side the theater
Lady- Hi! Enjoying Your Movie? (smile)
Monique- Yea…
Lady- That’s great! How may I help you?
Monique- Can I get a X-Large Sprite…and a Small Coke..
Lady- Sure! Will That Be all? (smile)
Monique- And some skittles?
Lady- That will be 8.29 would that be credit or cash?
Monique- Cash… (pulls out the amount of money and gets the stuff)
Lady- Have a nice day and Enjoy your movie! (smile)
Monique walked back in the movie and noticed jarell was fussin at the girl behind the seat
Jarell- I will slap ya and call yo ass suzy!
Girl- YOU AINT GANNA DO NADDA!
Jarell- Don’t make me jump over this chair and slam dunk yo ass in that pop corn bag!
Girl- SHUT UP!
Jarell- You shut up you the one who talking wit that hott ass breath close it! The air on damn!
Girl- Im out!
Jarell- Yea take yo nasty ol paper dickered ass lookin like a smurf ass on!
The girl just walked out and flicked him off
Monique had gave him is drink and burst in wit her big soda!
Jarell looked at monique’s and then his
Jarell- What happened to the rest of my soda?
Monique- Go get it yo self!
Kelt- Mo…can you get me something to drink?
Monique- I aint yo damn maid!
People- SSHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Kelt and Jarell got up and stuck their middle fingers up and mouthed the words…”Fuck all ya’ll”! Monique pulled on jarell’s yellow baggy wind breaker pants and told him to sit down and hold my soda so ill get Kelt one.
Monique walked to the line again and a new girl had helped her..
Lady- *Rolled her eyes at Monique* May I help you?
Monique jerked her head back and looked at her up and down..
Lady- I aint got all day.
Monique P.O.v
She Fuckin wit the wrong muthafucka
End
Monique- Uhuh I want a…shit…what the fuck I want…
Lady- *coughs*
Monique- I want uhh…hm… A X-Large orange soda..
Lady- What else?
Monique- And A large Hi-C
The lady made two of them and right when she bout to tell her, her price Monique had changed the order
Monique- Matta Of Fact, I don’t even want them… I want a hot dog with a X-Large Pepsi
The lady rolled her eyes and breathed hard and made the hot dog and had made the pepsi..
Lady- 4.05
Monique- Aw hell…Hol up gotta find it out my purse…
Monique had pulled her money out and purposely dropped all these pennies up just to waste her time….
Lady- (mumbles) Oh my god….(rollin her eyes)
Monique- If yo Boney ass help me then maybe we wont be standin here all night shit!
Lady just stood there and Monique gave her all these pennies to count and the amount of 3 dollars…
Monique walked away and went into the movie theater and gave kelt his soda and noticed jarell was slobbin all over her soda.
Monique- JARELL WHAT IS YOU DOIN DRINKIN MY SODA??
Jarell- I was thirsty…You might wanna get a refill too…
Monique- I cant Stand you
Jarell- Uhuh..thats nice
The movie was over and finally they all left to go to there cars..
Monique had dropped them off and went home but she left her front door key in the house so she had to go to the back… She opened the door and here dustin moanin…
Monique- Dustin???
Dustin- OOO Kelly!
Monique- What the hell??
Monique had walked by the bed room door and didn’t open it yet till she herd a girl moan Dustins name…
Monique had kicked the door open and looked around and saw some girl on top of dustin.
Monique- WHO THE FUCK IS THIS BITCH?
Dustin- Its not what it looks like
Monique- Its not what it looks like? So I guess im seein some shit off of fear factor or something huh?
Dustin-Baby please listen
Monique- WHY SHOULD I LISTEN? I ALREADY HERD HER MOANIN YO NAME??
The girl- Baby who is she?
Monique looked at the girl and then at Dustin
Monique-IM HIS DAMN BABY GIRL BITCH WHO YOU IS?
Girl- Im his girlfriend
Dustin- Bitch no you aint
Monique- You know what, both of ya’ll just get out of my damn house I PAY THE BILLS ROUND THIS BITCH SO YA’LL 2 MOFO’S CAN GET THE FUCK OUT MY DAMN HOUSE!
Girl- Baby come on
Monique- Bitch! *punches the girl in the face* BABY MY ASS HES MY BABY
Girl- Bitch if he was yo’s why he fuckin this?!
Monique- Cause I wont give it to his ass like you do he gets this every night bitch!
Monique walked over to dustin..
Monique- EVERY FUCKIN NIGHT!
Girl- Well I see I must of fucked him so good that he aint forget this shit yet!
Dustin- Monique lets just go
Monique- NO YOU AND YO HOE GO!
Girl- I aint no hoe!
Monique- Who The one wit out no clothes on?
Silence….
Monique- So back yo damn ass up before you get smacked down iight! Im from fuck Brooklyn You don’t wanna fuck wit a Brooklyn chick!
Girl- Bitch Fuck you!
Monique- Oh I see that job is already taken!
Dustin told the girl to get out the house and so she did
Dustin walked back over to Monique
Dustin- (slapped) WHAT THE FUCK WRONG WIT YOU INTERRUPTIN MY SHIT LIKE THAT???
Monique- INTERRUPTIN??? SO FUCKIN IS INTERRUPTIN?? I BETCHA IF I FUCK AROUND ON YO ASS YOU WILL HAVE A DAMN FIT! BUT LET IT BE ANOTHA BITCH! YOU JUST LET IT GO! *walks off and packs her things*
Dustin- WHERE U GOIN??
Monique just ignored him
Dustin- ASHLEY MONIQUE ALEXANDER WHERE YOU THINK YOU GOIN?!
Monique aint stud him she just got her things and walked off.. until…
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(and just to let you know two people are typin this story)
With Nesha
Fallen_Yella_Angel998 - June 1, 2005 01:02 AM (GMT)
[COLOR=blue]THAT BITCH GOT SOME NERVE FUCKIN DUSTIN. IF I WAS MO I WOULD'VE HIT HIM SO HARD PORK CHOPS WOULD COME OUT HIS ASS. THAT BITCH GOT SOME NERVE!!!
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Monique30815 - June 1, 2005 04:04 AM (GMT)
(and just to let you know two people are typin this story)
With Nesha
After we came from the hospital, my mom took me home..
Mom-Ok I’ma tell you this now, if he put his hands on you one more time, u just call and tell us so we can beat his ass…Ok???
Nesha-Yes mama…(so she got out the car and went in the apartment and saw Anthony on the floor leaning up against the wall with blood all over his body looking tore up)When Anthony saw her he said,
Anthony-So u set me up huh???(Trying to catch his breath)
Nesha-No because I went to the hospital with my mom..
Anthony-so u told them that I beat yo ass??(trying to get up)
Nesha-No now leave me alone….always tryin to run me…you cant do shit to me now..
Anthony-Yea that’s what you think…Just wait until I get up…yo ass is gone..
Nesha-Yea what eva…GOOD NIGHT!!!!(so she went in her room, locked the door, and went to sleep)
Anthony’s P.O.V
Just wait until the next day, she betta run or leave the house or something cause I’m gone kill her or do something to her cause she really irking my nerves..
End of P.O.V
The Next Day…
Chapter 2- Is This Love? Or Is This Just Someone Whoes Taking Control Of Me?
Anthony and His Girl, Nesha were at the restaurant as well as Monique And Dustin…
Anthony walked over to Dustin and had gave him dap
Anthony- Whats up man?
Dustin- Nothin…
Monique had walked over to where Anthony and some pretty fair brown skinned girl that seem like she would never say nothing to you unless you say something to her..
Anthony- Hey (looked up and down at Monique rubbin his hands together)
Dustin- Hey that’s my girl (pulled her by him)
Nesha walked over to Anthony and kissed him on the cheek.
Anthony P.O.V
What the hell was that for? She must tryna make up for earlier…
End P.O.V
Nesha- Oh Hi (smiled at Monique) Im Nesha..
Monique- Im Monique…
Dustin and Anthony offered them a seat and let them get a drink..
With Nesha
After we came from the hospital, my mom took me home..
Mom-Ok I’ma tell you this now, if he put his hands on you one more time, u just call and tell us so we can beat his ass…Ok???
Nesha-Yes mama…(so she got out the car and went in the apartment and saw Anthony on the floor leaning up against the wall with blood all over his body looking tore up)When Anthony saw her he said,
Anthony-So u set me up huh???(Trying to catch his breath)
Nesha-No because I went to the hospital with my mom..
Anthony-so u told them that I beat yo ass??(trying to get up)
Nesha-No now leave me alone….always tryin to run me…you cant do shit to me now..
Anthony-Yea that’s what you think…Just wait until I get up…yo ass is gone..
Nesha-Yea what eva…GOOD NIGHT!!!!(so she went in her room, locked the door, and went to sleep)
Anthony’s P.O.V
Just wait until the next day, she betta run or leave the house or something cause I’m gone kill her or do something to her cause she really irking my nerves..
End of P.O.V
The Next Day…
Chapter 2- Is This Love? Or Is This Just Someone Whoes Taking Control Of Me?
Anthony and His Girl, Nesha were at the restaurant as well as Monique And Dustin…
Anthony walked over to Dustin and had gave him dap
Anthony- Whats up man?
Dustin- Nothin…
Monique had walked over to where Anthony and some pretty fair brown skinned girl that seem like she would never say nothing to you unless you say something to her..
Anthony- Hey (looked up and down at Monique rubbin his hands together)
Dustin- Hey that’s my girl (pulled her by him)
Nesha walked over to Anthony and kissed him on the cheek.
Anthony P.O.V
What the hell was that for? She must tryna make up for earlier…
End P.O.V
Nesha- Oh Hi (smiled at Monique) Im Nesha..
Monique- Im Monique…
Dustin and Anthony offered them a seat and let them get a drink..
//:*Sw33tCraziiDym3*:\\ - June 1, 2005 04:56 PM (GMT)
Bumpiez ^_^
Druex's BabyBoo - June 1, 2005 07:32 PM (GMT)
yo bump this shit to da fullest
Jarellslilfan - June 1, 2005 11:53 PM (GMT)
bumpin!!! ::clap::
Monique30815 - June 2, 2005 07:07 AM (GMT)
Dustin and Anthony offered them a seat and let them get a drink..
Monique had eyed Nesha down
Monique P.O.V
She looks nice but why does she look so scared? And she got one big cut on her arm… Whats goin on…
End P.O.V
Nesha P.O.V
Man why she keep lookin at me like that?? Do I got something on my face or something or is she just thinking??? Well anyway I’ma try and be nice and not do anything to Anthony today cause ya’ll know how he is…but anyway I’ma try and make a conversation with her so she can stop staring at me now..
End of P.O.V
Nesha-So Monique how r u doing today??(smiling)
Monique- Well, im doin good…Im just thinking bout stuff…
Nesha- You Think Alot?
Monique- Yea….I do…Mostly….
Nesha- Girl Im Bout Ta Take These Light Bulbs out if they don’t turn down these lights in a minute.
Monique giggles a little- Girl you silly it is kinda bright in here…
Nesha- Kinda?? My own momma get on me for havin the light off when im on the computer!
Monique- Girl You Is Crazy! (giggle)
Nesha- One day imma just pull the main switch so it’ll be dark as shit in the house!
Monique-Girl you silly…How old are you?
Nesha-18, you?
Monique- GOD DAYUM! Aint Anthony 21?
Nesha- yea…
Monique- R.kelly…..
Nesha- Naw…
Monique- Well see me and Dustin been together every since the sandbox! Im 19
Nesha-I couldn’t go wit no one that long…when I was young it was that one week thang!
Monique- Naw…Hes really the only boy I went with…
Nesha- HHAAA….I woulda been like SPACE!
Monique- yea…but you cant do that when your in love.
Nesha- That’s that suga love…Sweet on the outside but hard on the inside.
Monique- Yea… You graduate???
Nesha- Class of 2005 whaatt
Monique- Fresh meat!
Nesha- Naw… The ish I been through…Should be happy im bout to get out of school.
Monique- Its ganna be even harder..trust me
*Waiter walks by and smiles at everyone but smiles more at Anthony*
Waiter-Hi may I take your orders? Or Do you still need some more minutes??
Anthony- Naw.. Ill have a Shirley Temple…
Nesha-He just gotta drink liquor don’t he (mumbles)
Anthony looked at Nesha
Nesha- Ill have a Strawberry Martine
Anthony- I don’t think you should be drinkin…
Monique looked at Anthony and laughed a lil
Nesha- Why I cant? You Drinkin..
Anthony- Get it then…
Nesha- Like I said That’s What I want (smile)
Monique- Ill have a hour glass of Bacardi
Dustin huggin Monique to let the waiter to not try nothing today..
Dustin- I’ll have the same
The waiter smiled back at Anthony
Waiter- Ill be back with your drinks.. Would you like appetizers?
Anthony laughes a lil – No thank you..
Nesha P.O.V
I know this girl see me sittin here all on him but she tryna push up on him…what is she thinking? What kinda shit is that? And he just ganna damn laugh….Ass….
End P.O.V
Nesha- Im bout ta go out to get a smoke!
Anthony- You don’t smoke…
Nesha- I do now..
Monique- Ill go out wit ya girl…
They both left out..
What do ya'll think they will talk about? What do you think the boys will talk about?? Do you think they will become closer by the conversation they will have?
Bump this up as well!
Monique
aka
Monique had eyed Nesha down
Monique P.O.V
She looks nice but why does she look so scared? And she got one big cut on her arm… Whats goin on…
End P.O.V
Nesha P.O.V
Man why she keep lookin at me like that?? Do I got something on my face or something or is she just thinking??? Well anyway I’ma try and be nice and not do anything to Anthony today cause ya’ll know how he is…but anyway I’ma try and make a conversation with her so she can stop staring at me now..
End of P.O.V
Nesha-So Monique how r u doing today??(smiling)
Monique- Well, im doin good…Im just thinking bout stuff…
Nesha- You Think Alot?
Monique- Yea….I do…Mostly….
Nesha- Girl Im Bout Ta Take These Light Bulbs out if they don’t turn down these lights in a minute.
Monique giggles a little- Girl you silly it is kinda bright in here…
Nesha- Kinda?? My own momma get on me for havin the light off when im on the computer!
Monique- Girl You Is Crazy! (giggle)
Nesha- One day imma just pull the main switch so it’ll be dark as shit in the house!
Monique-Girl you silly…How old are you?
Nesha-18, you?
Monique- GOD DAYUM! Aint Anthony 21?
Nesha- yea…
Monique- R.kelly…..
Nesha- Naw…
Monique- Well see me and Dustin been together every since the sandbox! Im 19
Nesha-I couldn’t go wit no one that long…when I was young it was that one week thang!
Monique- Naw…Hes really the only boy I went with…
Nesha- HHAAA….I woulda been like SPACE!
Monique- yea…but you cant do that when your in love.
Nesha- That’s that suga love…Sweet on the outside but hard on the inside.
Monique- Yea… You graduate???
Nesha- Class of 2005 whaatt
Monique- Fresh meat!
Nesha- Naw… The ish I been through…Should be happy im bout to get out of school.
Monique- Its ganna be even harder..trust me
*Waiter walks by and smiles at everyone but smiles more at Anthony*
Waiter-Hi may I take your orders? Or Do you still need some more minutes??
Anthony- Naw.. Ill have a Shirley Temple…
Nesha-He just gotta drink liquor don’t he (mumbles)
Anthony looked at Nesha
Nesha- Ill have a Strawberry Martine
Anthony- I don’t think you should be drinkin…
Monique looked at Anthony and laughed a lil
Nesha- Why I cant? You Drinkin..
Anthony- Get it then…
Nesha- Like I said That’s What I want (smile)
Monique- Ill have a hour glass of Bacardi
Dustin huggin Monique to let the waiter to not try nothing today..
Dustin- I’ll have the same
The waiter smiled back at Anthony
Waiter- Ill be back with your drinks.. Would you like appetizers?
Anthony laughes a lil – No thank you..
Nesha P.O.V
I know this girl see me sittin here all on him but she tryna push up on him…what is she thinking? What kinda shit is that? And he just ganna damn laugh….Ass….
End P.O.V
Nesha- Im bout ta go out to get a smoke!
Anthony- You don’t smoke…
Nesha- I do now..
Monique- Ill go out wit ya girl…
They both left out..
What do ya'll think they will talk about? What do you think the boys will talk about?? Do you think they will become closer by the conversation they will have?
Bump this up as well!
Monique
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Druex's BabyBoo - June 2, 2005 09:15 PM (GMT)
i think that they both going to talk about the real shit that goes on
The boys will talk about stupid stuff
defaintly they will get close
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The boys will talk about stupid stuff
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Monique30815 - July 11, 2005 07:29 PM (GMT)
Sorry I didnt update but its been a good while and problems but heres more..PLEASE FORGIVE ME!
Nesha- Im bout ta go out to get a smoke!
Anthony- You don’t smoke…
Nesha- I do now..
Monique- Ill go out wit ya girl…
They both left out..
During That night they were chillin outside talkin and got to know each other...
Nesha- Girl you crazy! I mean its like you coo wit
Monique- Girl I get that a lot…
Nesha- So how did you and Dustin meet?
M- Well, *sighs* my mom and I were at a store and he was our bagger…
Nesha- And it took off from there?
M- Yea….
N-Girl me and Anthony met from Dustin..
M- Oh coo…
There was silence till they saw a girl and a man arguing…
**The Scene They Saw**
Girl- I hate you! How Could You?!
Man- Baby Im sorry….I didn’t mean to..
Girl- WHAT YOU MEAN YOU DIDN’T MEAN TO? HOW DID YOU NOT MEAN TO? YOU FUCKED HER! HOW IS THAT DIDN’T MEAN TO?
Man- Bab—
Girl- DON’T CALL ME BABY! THAT BITCH IS YO BABY!
Man- Why you trippen…
Girl- Why Am I Trippen??? SEE IF THAT HOE YOU FUCKED LETS YOU SLEEP AT HER PLACE,
Man- It wasn’t nothing…
Girl- IF IT WASN’T NOTHIN WHY YOU FUCKED HER?? (Crying)
Man-(trying to hug her) I love you It was a mistake
Girl- (lookes at him and wipes her eyes) It was a mistake?? John HOW IS IT A MISTAKE IF YOU FUCKED HER? THAT’S WHAT ALL THE GUYS DO PLAY THE ROLE AND FUCK THE GIRLS AND THEN AFTERWORDS WHEN THEIR LOVABLE TRUTHFUL GIRLFRIENDS FIND OUT! THEY WANNA SAY IT WAS A MISTAKE!
Man- Im tellin the truth baby,
Girl- KISS MY FUCKIN ASS IM SICK OF TAKIN YO SHIT SO YOU AND THAT HOE CAN FUCKIN HAVE DAMN RASCALS AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER CAUSE THIS (points at her and him) Aint ment to be I see (she walks to her car and drives off)
**End of scene**
Nesha- Damn…
Monique- For real….
Nesha- Its getting cold in here and bout to go back in you wit me?
Monique- Of course
Nesha- Oh before we do give me your number
*They switch cell numbers and went back in the restaurant and sat down*
Dustin- Yall Was Gone For A Good While…
Nesha- Don’t Worry Bout That
Anthony- Who you think you is?
Nesha- Donesha Nicole Evans….
Anthony looked at Nesha with this mad look and Nesha Looked away.
Monique- Well baby Im getting tired so can we go?
Anthony- Oh yall can go to my place cause me and Dustin are ganna chill for a while, We have a lot to catch up on.
Nesha looked at Dustin,
Monique- Where yall goin?
Dustin- Ashley don’t worry bout it
Monique P.O.V
This nig done used my government name, they up to something cause when someone does that its serious…
End P.O.V
Nesha- What The Hell Yall Up To?
Monique Looked at Dustin serious with one eye brow up.
Anthony- Baby Don’t Worry That
Dustin- Heres the keys Baby yall can go anywhere and we will take anthony’s car to go to the places we need to go…
Monique took the keys, Dustin tried to give her a kiss but Monique moved away and walked off with Nesha they got in the car and went to Nesha’s place..Nesha had unlocked the door and they went in.
Monique- Damn Girl Yall House tight… Anthony live with you in here?
Nesha- Naw, this is MY house me and Anthony have a apt together, he don’t know bout this….
Monique- Imma keep it on a DL
Nesha- Yup (smile)
Monique- Well Imma change to something we goin to see my momma.
Nesha- Me too…
Nesha showed Monique a bathroom to shower and change in and Nesha had went to the other bathroom that was in the other room.
Nesha had changed into this..
Monique Had On This…
AUTHORS NOTE: THESE CLOTHES CHEAP! FIND THEM ON WWW.WALMART .COM the reason why I got cheap clothes because my people cant be wearin them real expensive clothes and stuff… yall feel me?
They came out the bathrooms with their outfits it was round 10:08 P.M.
Nesha- Let Me Drive…
Monique- You Got License?
Nesha- Yea I do girl
Monique- Iight then you can
Nesha and Monique switched seats and Nesha drove while Monique gave her directions..
Monique- NESHA I SAID LEFT!
Nesha- OO (She swerved to the left)
Monique- WHAT THE FUCK YOU TRYNA DO GET US DAMN KILLED?!
Nesha- girl I know what im doin! Which way…
Monique- Go straight…
Nesha- OOO THIS MY JAM! (turns up the radio)
Monique- You need to watch were you goin Donesha!
Nesha- OH SHIT! (Swerve to the other lane)
Both- Screamin!
Nesha stopped the car real hard…
Monique- GET OUT THE FUCKIN CAR
Nesha- man Mo c’mon man have some fun!
Monique- WHAT THE HELL I JUST SAID?!
Nesha and Monique switched seats again
Monique- shit…you aint ganna fuckin kill me tonight…
Nesha- (started laughin)
Monique- The Hell You Laughin for?
Nesha- Its funny, we were screamin and swerving and you got mad!
Monique- Hush (giggle)
Nesha- (Laughin hard hittin her leg) It was hilarious…
Monique and Nesha- (giggle)
They finally made it to Monique’s mom house, They had rung the doorbell…
Mo’s Mom- Hey Ashley Whoes Your Friend?
Monique- This Donesha, Donesha this is my mom Ms.Dee
Mo’s Mom- Donesha you know your ABC’s?
Nesha- Yes Ma’m
Mo’s Mom- Then you know my name just call me D
Nesha- (giggle) yes ma’m
D- So What brings you here…
Nesha- Im bout ta go out to get a smoke!
Anthony- You don’t smoke…
Nesha- I do now..
Monique- Ill go out wit ya girl…
They both left out..
During That night they were chillin outside talkin and got to know each other...
Nesha- Girl you crazy! I mean its like you coo wit
Monique- Girl I get that a lot…
Nesha- So how did you and Dustin meet?
M- Well, *sighs* my mom and I were at a store and he was our bagger…
Nesha- And it took off from there?
M- Yea….
N-Girl me and Anthony met from Dustin..
M- Oh coo…
There was silence till they saw a girl and a man arguing…
**The Scene They Saw**
Girl- I hate you! How Could You?!
Man- Baby Im sorry….I didn’t mean to..
Girl- WHAT YOU MEAN YOU DIDN’T MEAN TO? HOW DID YOU NOT MEAN TO? YOU FUCKED HER! HOW IS THAT DIDN’T MEAN TO?
Man- Bab—
Girl- DON’T CALL ME BABY! THAT BITCH IS YO BABY!
Man- Why you trippen…
Girl- Why Am I Trippen??? SEE IF THAT HOE YOU FUCKED LETS YOU SLEEP AT HER PLACE,
Man- It wasn’t nothing…
Girl- IF IT WASN’T NOTHIN WHY YOU FUCKED HER?? (Crying)
Man-(trying to hug her) I love you It was a mistake
Girl- (lookes at him and wipes her eyes) It was a mistake?? John HOW IS IT A MISTAKE IF YOU FUCKED HER? THAT’S WHAT ALL THE GUYS DO PLAY THE ROLE AND FUCK THE GIRLS AND THEN AFTERWORDS WHEN THEIR LOVABLE TRUTHFUL GIRLFRIENDS FIND OUT! THEY WANNA SAY IT WAS A MISTAKE!
Man- Im tellin the truth baby,
Girl- KISS MY FUCKIN ASS IM SICK OF TAKIN YO SHIT SO YOU AND THAT HOE CAN FUCKIN HAVE DAMN RASCALS AND LIVE HAPPILY EVER AFTER CAUSE THIS (points at her and him) Aint ment to be I see (she walks to her car and drives off)
**End of scene**
Nesha- Damn…
Monique- For real….
Nesha- Its getting cold in here and bout to go back in you wit me?
Monique- Of course
Nesha- Oh before we do give me your number
*They switch cell numbers and went back in the restaurant and sat down*
Dustin- Yall Was Gone For A Good While…
Nesha- Don’t Worry Bout That
Anthony- Who you think you is?
Nesha- Donesha Nicole Evans….
Anthony looked at Nesha with this mad look and Nesha Looked away.
Monique- Well baby Im getting tired so can we go?
Anthony- Oh yall can go to my place cause me and Dustin are ganna chill for a while, We have a lot to catch up on.
Nesha looked at Dustin,
Monique- Where yall goin?
Dustin- Ashley don’t worry bout it
Monique P.O.V
This nig done used my government name, they up to something cause when someone does that its serious…
End P.O.V
Nesha- What The Hell Yall Up To?
Monique Looked at Dustin serious with one eye brow up.
Anthony- Baby Don’t Worry That
Dustin- Heres the keys Baby yall can go anywhere and we will take anthony’s car to go to the places we need to go…
Monique took the keys, Dustin tried to give her a kiss but Monique moved away and walked off with Nesha they got in the car and went to Nesha’s place..Nesha had unlocked the door and they went in.
Monique- Damn Girl Yall House tight… Anthony live with you in here?
Nesha- Naw, this is MY house me and Anthony have a apt together, he don’t know bout this….
Monique- Imma keep it on a DL
Nesha- Yup (smile)
Monique- Well Imma change to something we goin to see my momma.
Nesha- Me too…
Nesha showed Monique a bathroom to shower and change in and Nesha had went to the other bathroom that was in the other room.
Nesha had changed into this..
Monique Had On This…
AUTHORS NOTE: THESE CLOTHES CHEAP! FIND THEM ON WWW.WALMART .COM the reason why I got cheap clothes because my people cant be wearin them real expensive clothes and stuff… yall feel me?
They came out the bathrooms with their outfits it was round 10:08 P.M.
Nesha- Let Me Drive…
Monique- You Got License?
Nesha- Yea I do girl
Monique- Iight then you can
Nesha and Monique switched seats and Nesha drove while Monique gave her directions..
Monique- NESHA I SAID LEFT!
Nesha- OO (She swerved to the left)
Monique- WHAT THE FUCK YOU TRYNA DO GET US DAMN KILLED?!
Nesha- girl I know what im doin! Which way…
Monique- Go straight…
Nesha- OOO THIS MY JAM! (turns up the radio)
Monique- You need to watch were you goin Donesha!
Nesha- OH SHIT! (Swerve to the other lane)
Both- Screamin!
Nesha stopped the car real hard…
Monique- GET OUT THE FUCKIN CAR
Nesha- man Mo c’mon man have some fun!
Monique- WHAT THE HELL I JUST SAID?!
Nesha and Monique switched seats again
Monique- shit…you aint ganna fuckin kill me tonight…
Nesha- (started laughin)
Monique- The Hell You Laughin for?
Nesha- Its funny, we were screamin and swerving and you got mad!
Monique- Hush (giggle)
Nesha- (Laughin hard hittin her leg) It was hilarious…
Monique and Nesha- (giggle)
They finally made it to Monique’s mom house, They had rung the doorbell…
Mo’s Mom- Hey Ashley Whoes Your Friend?
Monique- This Donesha, Donesha this is my mom Ms.Dee
Mo’s Mom- Donesha you know your ABC’s?
Nesha- Yes Ma’m
Mo’s Mom- Then you know my name just call me D
Nesha- (giggle) yes ma’m
D- So What brings you here…
mi55y - July 11, 2005 08:28 PM (GMT)
LET ME GET MY BACK
im smashin someones brains tonite
::Grabs bat and chases after dustin and anthony::
do sumtin child DO SOMETHING
im smashin someones brains tonite
::Grabs bat and chases after dustin and anthony::
do sumtin child DO SOMETHING
Monique30815 - July 14, 2005 04:42 PM (GMT)
Heres The Next Part
D- So What brings you here…
(Authors Note *Initials- D (mom her name is D so that’s her initial, M- Monique, N- Nesha)
M- Oh nothing just wanted to chill here and see whats happenin here cause it wasn’t nothing to do at the house…
D- 11:13 at night Ashley?
M- Well I was bored mom…
D- Uhuh (smokes her ciggerate)
N- Well actually Ms. Dee our boyfriends are out together…
D- Uhuh… Did Monique tell you her “boyfriend” beats on her?
M- Ma!
D- Did she tell you that her so called “boyfriend” does her like trash?
N-Ms. I don’t think I should be hearin this…
D- uhuh….(looks back at Monique) So babygirl, you still workin? Or is your boyfriend wont let you leave the house?
M- MOM! STOP!
D-still on house arrest from him aren’t you?
Nesha was lookin at her friends mom confused
Nesha P.O.V
I thought I was the only one, I mean dang….Why would her mom do her like that?
End P.O.V
Monique- Lets go! (gets her keys and leaves out with Nesha)
D- BE CAREFUL TO NOT GET KILLED! (Yells out)
They got in the car and Monique was drivin look straight at the rode, she didn’t takes her eyes off of the rode…
Nesha- Are you ok?
Monique didn’t say a word she started speedin….
Nesha- Monique you should just do 40 mph… (looks over at the dial) Your doin 50…
Monique concentration was on the rode,
Nesha- Look Ashley, your no the only one who gets beat by their boyfriend…
Monique- How would you know (still lookin at the rode) Donesha How would you know that I get beat by my boyfriend? How? (tear fell from her eye and she wipes it off and concentrates back at the rode tryin not to cry)
Nesha- I get beat by Anthony….
Monique- But I didn’t want you to know about my life (glances at Nesha) I don’t want No one to know, I get beat all the time Donesha!
Nesha- I do too Ashley, I do! Stop the car..
Monique stopped the car at a gas station
Nesha put her light on her and showed the marks on her arms,
Monique- How did you get that?
Nesha-He beat me one time for almost burnin the house down cause I was cookin…look at this one,…(she showed her back and showed a huge round cut on her back from the grease dropping on her from Anthony…)
Monique- He beats you like Dustin beats me….
Nesha- yea, (looks down and puts hair behind her ear)
Monique- One time he beated me.. Just cause I was talking to a boy… He was just a old friend from work….
Nesha- You ever got your tissue cut…
Monique- What do you mean?
Nesha- He had sex with me, and….h-he had rushed in too hard and stretched my tissue too bad till it ripped…
Monique covered her mouth from the shock…
Nesha- See… (smiles one side a lil and look at Monique) Your not the only one….
Monique-*starts the car* Why do they do this stuff….
Nesha- I guess they plan this… (looks out the window)
Monique makes a right turn…
Nesha- The house is left…Where are you goin?
Monique- Im ganna see something…
Monique drove to Anthony house to see if they were there but they weren’t, they went to Mo’s apt but they weren’t there either…. They drove around lookin around everywhere they think they would be but didn’t find them,…..
Nesha-Look that’s them aint it? (points)
They both look at their heads follow the car witch was goin the opposite way they were goin…
Monique- We ganna see where them bitches goin (makes a U- turn)
They drove behind them but 3 cars was between them so they wouldn’t notice they were being followed.
Nesha- (reads the sign) Flinder Rode? You know anyone they know here?
Monique- Nope (looks to the left)
******************* (Wit Dustin and Anthony) ***********************
Dustin- Hey Anthony drive these girls to their house (kisses one girl)
Anthony- Iight (smiles and turn to the right…)
Girl 1 (the one he was kissin)- Baby show me a good time…(kisses)
Dustin-Baby wit this train….I will!
Girl 1- (laugh) choo choo….
Girl 2- (Leans over the chair Anthony was sittin in drivin and covers his eyes)
Anthony- GIRL WHATS WRONG WIT U (Swerve)
****Wit The girls****
Monique- Da hell is goin on in that car??
Nesha- Iono but they must doin something that distractin…
*********
Anthony turned in some lil house drive way….Nesha and Monique drive on the opposite way and parked and turned the lights off….
What yall think ganna happen next??? Do you think the girls ganna find out whats goin on?? What you think ganna happen next? Bump it up, And Ill Keep It Up...
Monique and Donesha
D- So What brings you here…
(Authors Note *Initials- D (mom her name is D so that’s her initial, M- Monique, N- Nesha)
M- Oh nothing just wanted to chill here and see whats happenin here cause it wasn’t nothing to do at the house…
D- 11:13 at night Ashley?
M- Well I was bored mom…
D- Uhuh (smokes her ciggerate)
N- Well actually Ms. Dee our boyfriends are out together…
D- Uhuh… Did Monique tell you her “boyfriend” beats on her?
M- Ma!
D- Did she tell you that her so called “boyfriend” does her like trash?
N-Ms. I don’t think I should be hearin this…
D- uhuh….(looks back at Monique) So babygirl, you still workin? Or is your boyfriend wont let you leave the house?
M- MOM! STOP!
D-still on house arrest from him aren’t you?
Nesha was lookin at her friends mom confused
Nesha P.O.V
I thought I was the only one, I mean dang….Why would her mom do her like that?
End P.O.V
Monique- Lets go! (gets her keys and leaves out with Nesha)
D- BE CAREFUL TO NOT GET KILLED! (Yells out)
They got in the car and Monique was drivin look straight at the rode, she didn’t takes her eyes off of the rode…
Nesha- Are you ok?
Monique didn’t say a word she started speedin….
Nesha- Monique you should just do 40 mph… (looks over at the dial) Your doin 50…
Monique concentration was on the rode,
Nesha- Look Ashley, your no the only one who gets beat by their boyfriend…
Monique- How would you know (still lookin at the rode) Donesha How would you know that I get beat by my boyfriend? How? (tear fell from her eye and she wipes it off and concentrates back at the rode tryin not to cry)
Nesha- I get beat by Anthony….
Monique- But I didn’t want you to know about my life (glances at Nesha) I don’t want No one to know, I get beat all the time Donesha!
Nesha- I do too Ashley, I do! Stop the car..
Monique stopped the car at a gas station
Nesha put her light on her and showed the marks on her arms,
Monique- How did you get that?
Nesha-He beat me one time for almost burnin the house down cause I was cookin…look at this one,…(she showed her back and showed a huge round cut on her back from the grease dropping on her from Anthony…)
Monique- He beats you like Dustin beats me….
Nesha- yea, (looks down and puts hair behind her ear)
Monique- One time he beated me.. Just cause I was talking to a boy… He was just a old friend from work….
Nesha- You ever got your tissue cut…
Monique- What do you mean?
Nesha- He had sex with me, and….h-he had rushed in too hard and stretched my tissue too bad till it ripped…
Monique covered her mouth from the shock…
Nesha- See… (smiles one side a lil and look at Monique) Your not the only one….
Monique-*starts the car* Why do they do this stuff….
Nesha- I guess they plan this… (looks out the window)
Monique makes a right turn…
Nesha- The house is left…Where are you goin?
Monique- Im ganna see something…
Monique drove to Anthony house to see if they were there but they weren’t, they went to Mo’s apt but they weren’t there either…. They drove around lookin around everywhere they think they would be but didn’t find them,…..
Nesha-Look that’s them aint it? (points)
They both look at their heads follow the car witch was goin the opposite way they were goin…
Monique- We ganna see where them bitches goin (makes a U- turn)
They drove behind them but 3 cars was between them so they wouldn’t notice they were being followed.
Nesha- (reads the sign) Flinder Rode? You know anyone they know here?
Monique- Nope (looks to the left)
******************* (Wit Dustin and Anthony) ***********************
Dustin- Hey Anthony drive these girls to their house (kisses one girl)
Anthony- Iight (smiles and turn to the right…)
Girl 1 (the one he was kissin)- Baby show me a good time…(kisses)
Dustin-Baby wit this train….I will!
Girl 1- (laugh) choo choo….
Girl 2- (Leans over the chair Anthony was sittin in drivin and covers his eyes)
Anthony- GIRL WHATS WRONG WIT U (Swerve)
****Wit The girls****
Monique- Da hell is goin on in that car??
Nesha- Iono but they must doin something that distractin…
*********
Anthony turned in some lil house drive way….Nesha and Monique drive on the opposite way and parked and turned the lights off….
What yall think ganna happen next??? Do you think the girls ganna find out whats goin on?? What you think ganna happen next? Bump it up, And Ill Keep It Up...
Monique and Donesha
mi55y - July 14, 2005 05:44 PM (GMT)
i dont even know what to think
[bump this]
[bump this]
Monique30815 - July 14, 2005 06:47 PM (GMT)
Anthony turned in some lil house drive way….Nesha and Monique drive on the opposite way and parked and turned the lights off….
*********
Dustin- Baby open the door so we can get this over with…
Anthony too busy grabbin all on the girls ass…
Girl 1- iight hold on (gets keys out purse and unlocks the door)
Dustin goes in kissin on her…
Anthony walked in and the girl jumped on his back and the door slams!
******
Monique- OH HELL NAW!
Nesha- girl lets go…
Monique- HELL NAW YOU THANK I CAME HERE JUST TO SEE THIS?! WHAT?! YOU LOST YO MIND IMMA SHOW HIM DON’T FUCK WIT ME!
Nesha-Ashley we not suppose to be here!
Monique- I DON’T GIVE A DAMN! THIS BEEN TOO MANY TIMES HE CHEATED O
Nesha- ASHLEY WE ARE NOT SUPPOSE TO BE HERE! DON’T YOU UNDERSTAND IF WE WALK UP TO THAT (looks and points at the house door while in the car and looks back at Monique) DOOR WE WILL GET OUR ASS KICKED BY THEM?!
Monique- THEM BITCHES AINT GANNA WHOOP MY ASS!
Nesha- ASHLEY NOT THE GIRLS! ANT AND DUST! THEY WILL BEAT OUR ASS! WE DON’T NEED THAT!
Monique- Then what should we do?!
Nesha- ITS NOT OUR PROBLEM ASHLEY! ITS NOT…(looks out the window) Lets just go…
Monique looks at the house and tries not to think why she should not go in….
Nesha- (looks at Monique) Lets just go Ashley please…Just think about them hurtin us for creepin on them…(tear fall out her eye)
Monique- iight…(gets closer to the wheel and starts it up and drives back home)
Nesha and Monique make it back to her house and chills there watchin tv…
Nesha- Monique just forget about it….
Monique- I cant, I still think we should of went in…
Nesha- Why Ashley?? (Looks at Monique aka Ashley puzzled) Just to make us look good?
Monique looks at the white carpet…
Nesha- Cause that’s the only reason (changes the channel)
Monique- Even though we woulda said something they would know not to do that aga
Nesha- Monique what do you think?! They are not just some kids! We cant be their moms and tell them right from wrong (looks down at the ground) all the time…
Monique- Im not sayin th
Nesha- Then what are you sayin?! (stands up) Cause it seems like it…My mom always told me, dont let them know it hurts you, don’t even play their game cause what comes around goes around and it will definitely show back up… (looks out the window)
Monique- Your right….
Nesha’s cell rings to the ring tone Everything…”BABY” They both look at eachother…she answers….
Nesha- Hey baby….
Anthony- Hey….What you doin?
Nesha- oh nothing…(turns tv off) at the store helping Moe Shop for her mom….
Anthony- Oh…Well im on my way home,
Nesha- Where were you?
Anthony- I was gone…
Monique stands up and gets closer to the phone)
Nesha- (laughes a lil) and where is that?
Anthony- Baby why?
Monique- Girl you like this? I think my mom would love it! (playin it off)
Nesha- yea its cute… Anthony what was so important u went to that was not fun to be with me and have fun at the apartment?
Anthony- …. I and Dustin went drivin to the bar to catch up on stuff…
Nesha- oh ok…well you on your way home?
Anthony- yea we leavin out the bar now…
Girl- (whispers) call me…
Nesha- Who was that baby?
Anthony- O, that was this girl talking to a boy in the bar…
Nesha- Uhuh…don’t bring ya dirt to the house bye…
Anthony- Bye baby (laughes) I love you
Nesha- Love You Too…
Hang up…
Monique- Well?
Nesha- We need to go…
Nesha drove this time and got to the apartment, When they got in they were layin on couches watchin Martin Lawrence Runtelldat (cant spell it it’s the stand up comedy he recently made lol)
Martin Lawrence- THEY GANNA SAY I HAD A Gu, Iight I did have a gun
Audience laugh
*The door opens and it was Dustin and Anthony*
Anthony- Hey Monique
Monique- Hey…(try not to say nothing and stay calm)
Nesha looks at Monique
Anthony- Hey baby *kisses her on the lips* Imma go shower…
Monique laughes from what he said
Dustin- Why you giggling? (kisses her on the cheek)
Monique- Anthony bout to shower…yall smell like puppies! (Fake laughes)
Nesha- (fake laughes) I thought I was the only one! (gives Monique high 5)
Dustin- well we ganna get goin now cause Im tired and im sure your tired baby…
Monique- Yea…
Nesha- Iight (gets up and opens the door) call me tomorrow Monique I got some friends you can meet at the mall…
Monique- Ok girl *gives her dap and gets in the car*
Dustin- Nesha tell Ant i’ll be expectin a call 2marrow!
Nesha- iight (closes the door)
****************************
Monique and Dustin were in the car silence….
Dustin- (puts hand on her thigh) Baby imma work it when we get home….
Monique- Period on cant do it….
Dustin- baby c’mon yo period don’t come on till next week…
Monique- Early bird this month…
Dustin- (puts hand closer to her spot)
Monique- (pushes hands) Not tonight
Dustin- Why you trippen…
Monique- I aint never trip…
Dustin- so you wanna get smart?
Monique- Attitude is a mug today….
Dustin so you ganna be like this tonight? *Stops car cause stop light* baby come on (kisses)
Monique- Why tonight?
Dustin- Cause we haven’t did it in a long time…
Monique- Dustin it only been 4 days….
Dustin- That’s long baby…*drives and makes it home*
Monique gets her keys out her purse but Dustin pushes her on the wall and grabs her ass and bites on her kneck and suckin on it hard…
Monique- (tries to put the key in the door b4 she gets in the “mood”
Dustin- Come on we can do it out here!
Monique- In public?! You want them to know what I got?!
Dustin- fine…(smiles a lil and puts hands up)
Monique opens the door then dustin closes the door and pushes her on the couch and have sex with her… Then once he got what he wanted he showered but Monique had showered wit him too….
Monique- So you think im just your sex toy?
Dustin- What?
Monique- fuck me whenever you want, then throw me away?
Dustin- You okay (rubs the soap on between her breast and on down)
Monique- Don’t play dumb dustin!
Dustin- The fuck your talking bout?
Monique- Am I the only one you be fuckin? The Only one you love? The ONLY one you carry on a relationship with?
Dustin- Yes…what is this getting to?
Monique- I kn….nothin…
Dustin- You know what?
Monique- nothing baby…
Dustin-Tell me (looks at her with the water runnin on him)
Monique- nothing,
Dustin- Why you cant tell me? (puts his hand on her chin)
Monique pulls away
Dustin- so you ganna be like that?
Monique- DUSTIN U PLAYIN DUMB! JUST KEEP WASHIN YA ASS INSTEAD OF WASTEIN FUCKIN WATER AND GET IN BED SHIT!
With that dustin slapped her so hard her face hit the glass shower door…
Dustin- THE FUCK WRONG WITH YOU?! I AINT DO SHIT TO YOUR ASS BITCH!
Monique- SO IMMA BITCH NOW?! U WASN’T SAYIN THAT 5 MINUTES AGO! (Gets out the shower and wrap a towel on her leaves the bathroom and slams the door to her bedroom…
Dustin- YEA STAY OUT MY SHOWER TIME!
Monique- ass hole, (she puts on clothes and combs her hair and lays down on the couch..) I aint do shit to him…(rubs her right cheek)
Dustin got out the shower put on clothes and walk in there room Monique was in,
Dustin- Why you not commin in bed?
Monique- U FUCKIN SICK FREAK YOU SLAPPED THE SHIT OUT OF ME AND NOW YOU WANT ME TO COME IN BED?! BITCH GO SLEEP U DRUNK!
Dustin-stay a hoe im out (leaves the house and drives off)
Monique goes to sleep….
*********
Dustin- Baby open the door so we can get this over with…
Anthony too busy grabbin all on the girls ass…
Girl 1- iight hold on (gets keys out purse and unlocks the door)
Dustin goes in kissin on her…
Anthony walked in and the girl jumped on his back and the door slams!
******
Monique- OH HELL NAW!
Nesha- girl lets go…
Monique- HELL NAW YOU THANK I CAME HERE JUST TO SEE THIS?! WHAT?! YOU LOST YO MIND IMMA SHOW HIM DON’T FUCK WIT ME!
Nesha-Ashley we not suppose to be here!
Monique- I DON’T GIVE A DAMN! THIS BEEN TOO MANY TIMES HE CHEATED O
Nesha- ASHLEY WE ARE NOT SUPPOSE TO BE HERE! DON’T YOU UNDERSTAND IF WE WALK UP TO THAT (looks and points at the house door while in the car and looks back at Monique) DOOR WE WILL GET OUR ASS KICKED BY THEM?!
Monique- THEM BITCHES AINT GANNA WHOOP MY ASS!
Nesha- ASHLEY NOT THE GIRLS! ANT AND DUST! THEY WILL BEAT OUR ASS! WE DON’T NEED THAT!
Monique- Then what should we do?!
Nesha- ITS NOT OUR PROBLEM ASHLEY! ITS NOT…(looks out the window) Lets just go…
Monique looks at the house and tries not to think why she should not go in….
Nesha- (looks at Monique) Lets just go Ashley please…Just think about them hurtin us for creepin on them…(tear fall out her eye)
Monique- iight…(gets closer to the wheel and starts it up and drives back home)
Nesha and Monique make it back to her house and chills there watchin tv…
Nesha- Monique just forget about it….
Monique- I cant, I still think we should of went in…
Nesha- Why Ashley?? (Looks at Monique aka Ashley puzzled) Just to make us look good?
Monique looks at the white carpet…
Nesha- Cause that’s the only reason (changes the channel)
Monique- Even though we woulda said something they would know not to do that aga
Nesha- Monique what do you think?! They are not just some kids! We cant be their moms and tell them right from wrong (looks down at the ground) all the time…
Monique- Im not sayin th
Nesha- Then what are you sayin?! (stands up) Cause it seems like it…My mom always told me, dont let them know it hurts you, don’t even play their game cause what comes around goes around and it will definitely show back up… (looks out the window)
Monique- Your right….
Nesha’s cell rings to the ring tone Everything…”BABY” They both look at eachother…she answers….
Nesha- Hey baby….
Anthony- Hey….What you doin?
Nesha- oh nothing…(turns tv off) at the store helping Moe Shop for her mom….
Anthony- Oh…Well im on my way home,
Nesha- Where were you?
Anthony- I was gone…
Monique stands up and gets closer to the phone)
Nesha- (laughes a lil) and where is that?
Anthony- Baby why?
Monique- Girl you like this? I think my mom would love it! (playin it off)
Nesha- yea its cute… Anthony what was so important u went to that was not fun to be with me and have fun at the apartment?
Anthony- …. I and Dustin went drivin to the bar to catch up on stuff…
Nesha- oh ok…well you on your way home?
Anthony- yea we leavin out the bar now…
Girl- (whispers) call me…
Nesha- Who was that baby?
Anthony- O, that was this girl talking to a boy in the bar…
Nesha- Uhuh…don’t bring ya dirt to the house bye…
Anthony- Bye baby (laughes) I love you
Nesha- Love You Too…
Hang up…
Monique- Well?
Nesha- We need to go…
Nesha drove this time and got to the apartment, When they got in they were layin on couches watchin Martin Lawrence Runtelldat (cant spell it it’s the stand up comedy he recently made lol)
Martin Lawrence- THEY GANNA SAY I HAD A Gu, Iight I did have a gun
Audience laugh
*The door opens and it was Dustin and Anthony*
Anthony- Hey Monique
Monique- Hey…(try not to say nothing and stay calm)
Nesha looks at Monique
Anthony- Hey baby *kisses her on the lips* Imma go shower…
Monique laughes from what he said
Dustin- Why you giggling? (kisses her on the cheek)
Monique- Anthony bout to shower…yall smell like puppies! (Fake laughes)
Nesha- (fake laughes) I thought I was the only one! (gives Monique high 5)
Dustin- well we ganna get goin now cause Im tired and im sure your tired baby…
Monique- Yea…
Nesha- Iight (gets up and opens the door) call me tomorrow Monique I got some friends you can meet at the mall…
Monique- Ok girl *gives her dap and gets in the car*
Dustin- Nesha tell Ant i’ll be expectin a call 2marrow!
Nesha- iight (closes the door)
****************************
Monique and Dustin were in the car silence….
Dustin- (puts hand on her thigh) Baby imma work it when we get home….
Monique- Period on cant do it….
Dustin- baby c’mon yo period don’t come on till next week…
Monique- Early bird this month…
Dustin- (puts hand closer to her spot)
Monique- (pushes hands) Not tonight
Dustin- Why you trippen…
Monique- I aint never trip…
Dustin- so you wanna get smart?
Monique- Attitude is a mug today….
Dustin so you ganna be like this tonight? *Stops car cause stop light* baby come on (kisses)
Monique- Why tonight?
Dustin- Cause we haven’t did it in a long time…
Monique- Dustin it only been 4 days….
Dustin- That’s long baby…*drives and makes it home*
Monique gets her keys out her purse but Dustin pushes her on the wall and grabs her ass and bites on her kneck and suckin on it hard…
Monique- (tries to put the key in the door b4 she gets in the “mood”
Dustin- Come on we can do it out here!
Monique- In public?! You want them to know what I got?!
Dustin- fine…(smiles a lil and puts hands up)
Monique opens the door then dustin closes the door and pushes her on the couch and have sex with her… Then once he got what he wanted he showered but Monique had showered wit him too….
Monique- So you think im just your sex toy?
Dustin- What?
Monique- fuck me whenever you want, then throw me away?
Dustin- You okay (rubs the soap on between her breast and on down)
Monique- Don’t play dumb dustin!
Dustin- The fuck your talking bout?
Monique- Am I the only one you be fuckin? The Only one you love? The ONLY one you carry on a relationship with?
Dustin- Yes…what is this getting to?
Monique- I kn….nothin…
Dustin- You know what?
Monique- nothing baby…
Dustin-Tell me (looks at her with the water runnin on him)
Monique- nothing,
Dustin- Why you cant tell me? (puts his hand on her chin)
Monique pulls away
Dustin- so you ganna be like that?
Monique- DUSTIN U PLAYIN DUMB! JUST KEEP WASHIN YA ASS INSTEAD OF WASTEIN FUCKIN WATER AND GET IN BED SHIT!
With that dustin slapped her so hard her face hit the glass shower door…
Dustin- THE FUCK WRONG WITH YOU?! I AINT DO SHIT TO YOUR ASS BITCH!
Monique- SO IMMA BITCH NOW?! U WASN’T SAYIN THAT 5 MINUTES AGO! (Gets out the shower and wrap a towel on her leaves the bathroom and slams the door to her bedroom…
Dustin- YEA STAY OUT MY SHOWER TIME!
Monique- ass hole, (she puts on clothes and combs her hair and lays down on the couch..) I aint do shit to him…(rubs her right cheek)
Dustin got out the shower put on clothes and walk in there room Monique was in,
Dustin- Why you not commin in bed?
Monique- U FUCKIN SICK FREAK YOU SLAPPED THE SHIT OUT OF ME AND NOW YOU WANT ME TO COME IN BED?! BITCH GO SLEEP U DRUNK!
Dustin-stay a hoe im out (leaves the house and drives off)
Monique goes to sleep….
Monique30815 - August 12, 2005 07:24 PM (GMT)
Monique- U FUCKIN SICK FREAK YOU SLAPPED THE SHIT OUT OF ME AND NOW YOU WANT ME TO COME IN BED?! BITCH GO SLEEP U DRUNK!
Dustin-stay a hoe im out (leaves the house and drives off)
Monique goes to sleep….
It was around 5 in the morning so Monique woke up shiverin, she went to the closet to get her some cover and layed back on the couch but couldn’t sleep…
Monique P.O.V
Damn…I cant sleep worth nothing….Im too mad bout what happened….Maybe since hes not home, I should go to them girls house and whoop they ass myself….hmm….(evil smile)
End P.O.V
Monique gets up and calls Nesha on block to see if she woke,
***Phone call***
Nesha looks at her cell... “Private” she answered it…
Nesha- Hello?
Moni- Nesha this Monique
Nesha- The hell you callin at *looks at phone* 5:16 in tha morning
Monique- Its not 5:16, its 5:17 (laughes) but put on some clothes imma pick you up...
Nesha- Man naw, what you want…
Monique- We ganna talk to them girls man this time the boys cant do nothing…
Nesha- man iight imma come just so you can shut up and get it over with…
**They hang up**
Monique drives to her house and Nesha runs to the car and gets in….
***Anthony P.o.V***
Now where the hell she goin? (closes the curtains) I wonder what she up to, this late… She probley just went to Monique house… hm….
END P.O.V
Anthony calls Dustin but Dustin voice mail comes on…
Anthony- Shit (looks at phone) that’s not usual for him not to answer his phone…
Anthony just forgot about it and went back to sleep….
****In the car****
Nesha- And why are we doin this again?
Monique- Cause I wanna do it…
Nesha- IIght, (yarn) this is crazy…
Monique- Yea two bitches (lookin out the window)…
Nesha laughed…
Monique-Glanced at Nesha) The hell you laughin for?
Nesha- Your so eager to fight…I betcha you was a bully at yo school….(laughin)
Monique- Naw…I was a punk…
Nesha- You serious?! (looks at Monique)
Moniquea turns and drives into the neighborhood…
Nesha cell rung it was Anthony she didn’t answer…
Monique- Which house was it,
Nesha- You should know Monique
Monique- I think it was this one, go see if its this house…
Nesha- What the hell imma do? Ring the door and ask for some sugar?
Monique- GOODNESS! *she got out the car and rung the door*
**An old lady answered**
O/l- What do you want child?
Monique- (noticed it was the wrong house) Oh hi, is Mike here?
O/l-No im sorry you have the wrong house… (closes the door)
Monique walked into the car and drove further till they found the house…They both got out the car and rung the doorbell…
Girl 1- How can I help you? (attitude)
Monique-Does a Lisa lives here?
Girl 1- Yea this is lisa (looks at her and folds her arms) what do you want?
Monique-Do you know a boy named Dustin?
Lisa- (laughs) Ohh….yea (makes out a soft moan) I know him…Anyway who are you? (looks at her up and down)
Nesha looked around to make sure no one was watchin….
Monique-Don’t worry bout who I am…Just know don’t fuck wit Dustin bitch…
Girl 2- Whoes at the door (peekin around the corner)
Nesha turns around to see the other girl….
Nesha- Come here bitch…
Girl 2- Excuse me?
Nesha- Who you fucked last night?
Girl 2- What?
Nesha- waste my breath…*rolls eyes*
Lisa- Natasha these bitches tryna start shit cause we fucked their “boyfriends”
Monique- BITCH I GOT YO BITCH RIGHT HERE!
Lisa- I aint got time to fight….I just showered…
Monique- Come out side hoe!
Nesha- So fuckin what you showered? Shit I just took a nap.
Natasha- Yall need to go in yall cars and go home before yall get stomped on..
Nesha- Bitch im gangsta I’ll fuck you up! (look at her)
Natasha- *got in her face* Do it….*looks up and down* I wanna see you do it…
Nesha- Bitch you betta back up off my face…
Natasha- Bitch I aint gotta do noth
Nesha punched her in her face before she finished her sentence!
Nesha- BITCH LIKE I SAID BACK THE FUCK UP (Kicks her in the hip) GET UP
Monique looks at the girl bout to get up…
Lisa- You betta get your damn bitches and control them!
Monique- Bitch shut yo damn ass up before you be on the ground too!
Lisa took Monique hair and slung her up against the wall
Lisa- SAY SOMETHIN NOW BITCH!
Monique grabbed lisa shirt and pulled her for her to fall on the ground and got on top of her and started takin her head bangin it in to the ground
Nesha- Beat her ass!
Lisa reached up and took Monique by the hair and slammed it on the door frame by her…
Nesha- Oh hell naw! (she kicked her in her head) LET GO!
Natasha- BITCH! (she opened the door and tried to get in but Nesha grabbed her by the shirt and pulled her back and took her head and banged it against the door..
SSSSCCCCRRRREEEEETTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHH
Monique took Lisa by the leg and dragged her in the middle of the street makin her face scrape against the ground then she took her legs and arms and made it into a X and took her rob off which she was left naked…
Nesha- What imma do wit her?
Monique- Put her in the trunk!
They took together and put her in and drove up the street to the sign that said Apple Valley and layed her on the sign with her body hung over the huge long sign and her ass showin…
Nesha- Apple Valley…Apple Bottom….(Laughs)
Monique drove off and dropped Nesha at her house….
Monique- Remember…this aint neva happen…
Nesha- Iight…
Monique drove off and Nesha unlocked her door and went into the house the lights were off…
Anthony- Where you been?
Nesha- Oh I was at Moniques House…
Anthony- You went out…and commin back at 4:43 AM in the morning?
Nesha-….we wanted to hang out together….
Anthony- BULLSHIT!
Nesha- What ever Anthony….Your trippen...(Walks off into her room)
Anthony walks in the room and grabs her by the kneck and throws her against the wall…
Anthony- Don’t you ever…EVER….Walk away from me when im talking to you,
Nesha- Let me go!
Anthony banged her against the wall….
Anthony- Shut up! You understand me!
Nesha- *spits in his face*
Anthony- BITCH (Slaps her)
Nesha- (looks back at Anthony and moves her hair from her left side of her face to look at him in the eyes….) Don’t you slap me!
Anthony- OR WHAT!? (gets closer to her)
Nesha- Or you’ll get yo ass whooped!
Anthony- (laughs) by who? You???
Nesha- Yea bitch! I can whoop yo ass if I tried…
Anthony-Oh is that right??? We’ll see… (he walks off and closes the door behind him)
Nesha looks at the door with a tear…
Nesha- Fuck this im leavin! *she packs up for 2 hours and sneeks off and leave)
Nesha P.O.V
Where the hell imma go wit 80 dollars? Shit…cant go far…
End P.O.V….
The Next Mornin…
Monique was in her bed and woke up and looked over at Dustin and thought about what happened last night….
*Knock on the Door*
Monique P.O.V.
You open the door and notice it was too cops at your door step…
Cop 1- Yes is there a Monique Breeding living here?
You (Monique) - Yes that’s me,
Cop 2- Where were you this morning at the time 5:35 AM (looks up at you)
You- I was at my friends house Nesha..
Dustin walks behind you yarnin…
Dustin- Whats goin on Moe?
Monique-Iono you tell me..(lookin at Dustin)
Cop 1-Well it looks like you been to a girl name Lisa house..(looking at Monique)
Cop 2-and you left her in the middle of the street last night… and your friend Nesha Smith tried to kill a girl name Natasha…
Dustin looks at Monique with a puzzled look on his face…Monique looked at Dustin cause he wasn’t suppose to know…
Cop 1- Is this true?
Monique P.O.V
What the hell should I say? Should I lie? Should I tell the Truth? Too much runnin through my mind right now…I know if I lie Im goin to jail…and I know if I don’t lie…I may still go to jail…I knew I shoulda listen to Donesha… Man,…Im in some serious shit right now….what the hell should I do…
End P.O.V
Dustin-stay a hoe im out (leaves the house and drives off)
Monique goes to sleep….
It was around 5 in the morning so Monique woke up shiverin, she went to the closet to get her some cover and layed back on the couch but couldn’t sleep…
Monique P.O.V
Damn…I cant sleep worth nothing….Im too mad bout what happened….Maybe since hes not home, I should go to them girls house and whoop they ass myself….hmm….(evil smile)
End P.O.V
Monique gets up and calls Nesha on block to see if she woke,
***Phone call***
Nesha looks at her cell... “Private” she answered it…
Nesha- Hello?
Moni- Nesha this Monique
Nesha- The hell you callin at *looks at phone* 5:16 in tha morning
Monique- Its not 5:16, its 5:17 (laughes) but put on some clothes imma pick you up...
Nesha- Man naw, what you want…
Monique- We ganna talk to them girls man this time the boys cant do nothing…
Nesha- man iight imma come just so you can shut up and get it over with…
**They hang up**
Monique drives to her house and Nesha runs to the car and gets in….
***Anthony P.o.V***
Now where the hell she goin? (closes the curtains) I wonder what she up to, this late… She probley just went to Monique house… hm….
END P.O.V
Anthony calls Dustin but Dustin voice mail comes on…
Anthony- Shit (looks at phone) that’s not usual for him not to answer his phone…
Anthony just forgot about it and went back to sleep….
****In the car****
Nesha- And why are we doin this again?
Monique- Cause I wanna do it…
Nesha- IIght, (yarn) this is crazy…
Monique- Yea two bitches (lookin out the window)…
Nesha laughed…
Monique-Glanced at Nesha) The hell you laughin for?
Nesha- Your so eager to fight…I betcha you was a bully at yo school….(laughin)
Monique- Naw…I was a punk…
Nesha- You serious?! (looks at Monique)
Moniquea turns and drives into the neighborhood…
Nesha cell rung it was Anthony she didn’t answer…
Monique- Which house was it,
Nesha- You should know Monique
Monique- I think it was this one, go see if its this house…
Nesha- What the hell imma do? Ring the door and ask for some sugar?
Monique- GOODNESS! *she got out the car and rung the door*
**An old lady answered**
O/l- What do you want child?
Monique- (noticed it was the wrong house) Oh hi, is Mike here?
O/l-No im sorry you have the wrong house… (closes the door)
Monique walked into the car and drove further till they found the house…They both got out the car and rung the doorbell…
Girl 1- How can I help you? (attitude)
Monique-Does a Lisa lives here?
Girl 1- Yea this is lisa (looks at her and folds her arms) what do you want?
Monique-Do you know a boy named Dustin?
Lisa- (laughs) Ohh….yea (makes out a soft moan) I know him…Anyway who are you? (looks at her up and down)
Nesha looked around to make sure no one was watchin….
Monique-Don’t worry bout who I am…Just know don’t fuck wit Dustin bitch…
Girl 2- Whoes at the door (peekin around the corner)
Nesha turns around to see the other girl….
Nesha- Come here bitch…
Girl 2- Excuse me?
Nesha- Who you fucked last night?
Girl 2- What?
Nesha- waste my breath…*rolls eyes*
Lisa- Natasha these bitches tryna start shit cause we fucked their “boyfriends”
Monique- BITCH I GOT YO BITCH RIGHT HERE!
Lisa- I aint got time to fight….I just showered…
Monique- Come out side hoe!
Nesha- So fuckin what you showered? Shit I just took a nap.
Natasha- Yall need to go in yall cars and go home before yall get stomped on..
Nesha- Bitch im gangsta I’ll fuck you up! (look at her)
Natasha- *got in her face* Do it….*looks up and down* I wanna see you do it…
Nesha- Bitch you betta back up off my face…
Natasha- Bitch I aint gotta do noth
Nesha punched her in her face before she finished her sentence!
Nesha- BITCH LIKE I SAID BACK THE FUCK UP (Kicks her in the hip) GET UP
Monique looks at the girl bout to get up…
Lisa- You betta get your damn bitches and control them!
Monique- Bitch shut yo damn ass up before you be on the ground too!
Lisa took Monique hair and slung her up against the wall
Lisa- SAY SOMETHIN NOW BITCH!
Monique grabbed lisa shirt and pulled her for her to fall on the ground and got on top of her and started takin her head bangin it in to the ground
Nesha- Beat her ass!
Lisa reached up and took Monique by the hair and slammed it on the door frame by her…
Nesha- Oh hell naw! (she kicked her in her head) LET GO!
Natasha- BITCH! (she opened the door and tried to get in but Nesha grabbed her by the shirt and pulled her back and took her head and banged it against the door..
SSSSCCCCRRRREEEEETTTTCCCCCHHHHHHHH
Monique took Lisa by the leg and dragged her in the middle of the street makin her face scrape against the ground then she took her legs and arms and made it into a X and took her rob off which she was left naked…
Nesha- What imma do wit her?
Monique- Put her in the trunk!
They took together and put her in and drove up the street to the sign that said Apple Valley and layed her on the sign with her body hung over the huge long sign and her ass showin…
Nesha- Apple Valley…Apple Bottom….(Laughs)
Monique drove off and dropped Nesha at her house….
Monique- Remember…this aint neva happen…
Nesha- Iight…
Monique drove off and Nesha unlocked her door and went into the house the lights were off…
Anthony- Where you been?
Nesha- Oh I was at Moniques House…
Anthony- You went out…and commin back at 4:43 AM in the morning?
Nesha-….we wanted to hang out together….
Anthony- BULLSHIT!
Nesha- What ever Anthony….Your trippen...(Walks off into her room)
Anthony walks in the room and grabs her by the kneck and throws her against the wall…
Anthony- Don’t you ever…EVER….Walk away from me when im talking to you,
Nesha- Let me go!
Anthony banged her against the wall….
Anthony- Shut up! You understand me!
Nesha- *spits in his face*
Anthony- BITCH (Slaps her)
Nesha- (looks back at Anthony and moves her hair from her left side of her face to look at him in the eyes….) Don’t you slap me!
Anthony- OR WHAT!? (gets closer to her)
Nesha- Or you’ll get yo ass whooped!
Anthony- (laughs) by who? You???
Nesha- Yea bitch! I can whoop yo ass if I tried…
Anthony-Oh is that right??? We’ll see… (he walks off and closes the door behind him)
Nesha looks at the door with a tear…
Nesha- Fuck this im leavin! *she packs up for 2 hours and sneeks off and leave)
Nesha P.O.V
Where the hell imma go wit 80 dollars? Shit…cant go far…
End P.O.V….
The Next Mornin…
Monique was in her bed and woke up and looked over at Dustin and thought about what happened last night….
*Knock on the Door*
Monique P.O.V.
You open the door and notice it was too cops at your door step…
Cop 1- Yes is there a Monique Breeding living here?
You (Monique) - Yes that’s me,
Cop 2- Where were you this morning at the time 5:35 AM (looks up at you)
You- I was at my friends house Nesha..
Dustin walks behind you yarnin…
Dustin- Whats goin on Moe?
Monique-Iono you tell me..(lookin at Dustin)
Cop 1-Well it looks like you been to a girl name Lisa house..(looking at Monique)
Cop 2-and you left her in the middle of the street last night… and your friend Nesha Smith tried to kill a girl name Natasha…
Dustin looks at Monique with a puzzled look on his face…Monique looked at Dustin cause he wasn’t suppose to know…
Cop 1- Is this true?
Monique P.O.V
What the hell should I say? Should I lie? Should I tell the Truth? Too much runnin through my mind right now…I know if I lie Im goin to jail…and I know if I don’t lie…I may still go to jail…I knew I shoulda listen to Donesha… Man,…Im in some serious shit right now….what the hell should I do…
End P.O.V
Monique30815 - August 12, 2005 07:25 PM (GMT)
TELL ME WHAT YALL THINK!!
dee's baby girl11 - August 12, 2005 10:40 PM (GMT)
i'm liking it so far. i ain't read it all yet, but i'm bumpin, cuz it's hot!!!!! ^_^