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whodaputa - March 15, 2004 07:13 AM (GMT)
I sat down and I had distance stuck in my head and id like to think its inspired from the song but after re-reading and fixin it up...it i dont think it is! :D
and its not quite done, im still not sure what I want to use hybird or hybred and just methane or just cocain or keep with both argg! :blink:



Hybird
It痴 distance that keeps me adamant
I値l trace the line
To find the missing part of it
Maybe I値l trip and fall
And land face first into it

Chorus
I知 so disenchanted
To be earnest with you
I知 so insane
Hybrid on methane and cocaine
And my hearts been disengage


Sympathetically I値l keep
Your soul tied here
Just to make you steer
Off the road
You were always ugly

And I feel so fabricated
So materialized, crystallized
Striving for the love that痴
Only a fairy tales design
What a suicide

Chorus

So when you make it to the ocean
Wont mark my name in the sand
So the tide can wash me away
Along with the morning rain





practiceheart - March 24, 2004 03:32 PM (GMT)
I love your word usage. Very good!




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