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Title: "Dying to be Alive"...
Description: my song


guitargirl - March 24, 2004 05:00 AM (GMT)
Hey guys, thought I would post a song;i wrote this through my brother's eyes at a time when he was going through the whole "finding yourself" time. Hope it makes at least a lil' sense.

Dying to be Alive
Copyright ©2004

Eyes shut and heart grows cold,
memories slowly seep away,
and seclusion becomes bold.

Pulse goes flat and blood stops its flow,
life flashes and my soul starts to go.

I'm dying to be alive, can't you see?
My life wants to start
and my soul wants to be free.

Heart starts to beat, only to stop.
Pressure starts to rise, only to drop.

I'm dying to be alive, don't you see?
My life is so far from where I want it to be.

Hands grasp and breathing slims,
life disappears from beginning to end.
Vision blurs and sound goes down,
the world is busy, but I've not been found.

I'm dying to be alive, can't anyone see?
I'm dying to be alave,
am I the only one who can save me from me?

whodaputa - March 24, 2004 05:45 AM (GMT)
that song is totaly the place im coming out from, I like it :D

practiceheart - March 24, 2004 03:31 PM (GMT)
That's really good. :)




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