As per my Usual Greetings,

Greetings and Salutations, my name is Tobias, or that is at the least, my Online Name, and I was wondering if it will be regarded as breaking the rules if I were to rewrite a few of the spells and weapons that my character has in his Inventory. The Hopes and Prayers of the Children of Light, have given me strength to win this fight


Valiant Sword
Description: A blade enchanted by Angels to destroy any evil in the being it fights against without destroying the entire being.

This I do like, greatly, but I would like to add in a size of the weapon, blade and hilt, width and length. Now, I am not requesting for an opportunity to run the these peaceful lands, swinging a ten foot long saber, and yelling gleefully "You are mine, you sap sucking liver mither!" No, I can not tell you what a Liver Mither is, I believe it is my grandfathers way around saying the MFer words. Now, back on topic, I wish for a five foot long sword, roughly 3.5' for the blade, as well as another 1.5' for the hilt, dual handed. The blade will be of a blue toned material known as DragonTear, a durable material that is slightly stronger than Diamond, and can only be forged within the walls of Heaven. I would continue to hold the description of the weapon in tact, as I prefer such a weapon and think it much easier to imagine Tobias dueling with the Evil of a person rather than the person themself.


Plate Chest


Plate Gauntlets

With these I would like to preform a similar rewrite, however, from checking in the shops, I have noticed the lack of Description for these particular items. I would like to put that these items are of a light blue, nearly sky color shading. The Plate Chest has several large protrusions rising from the shoulders, shaped as angelic feathers, only nearly three inches thick, and rather dull around the tips and sides. For an image of what I would like to design these items as, there is a picture located here.



Mirror Magic
Description: This spell creates thousands of mirrors around the target, and the caster can hide in the mirror’s and project the image into all of them, making it confusing for the target trapped.


Fireball
Description: A ball of flames erupts from your hand and can be hurled at a chosen target.

Mirror Magic is a wonderful spell, and I see much possibilities with it, and would like to rework the spell as my own. In my version the spell will work nearly identical to the description that has been placed in the shops, however, once inside one of the mirrors, magic spells are duplicated by the images inside the other mirrors, placing the opponent inside a virtual dome of the smack down, heh heh. As I have Fireball, I will use this as an example. Once Tobias is able to summon the mirrors, he will step inside of their reversed world. Once inside, Tobias will summon "Fire Ball", while at the same time the other versions of Tobias inside the other mirrors will summon their own "Fire Ball"s. Each "Fire Ball" is just as real as the one that the true Tobias summoned, and allows for a wave of the same attack to come at the opponent from all sides. However, if the mirrors are cracked, or broken, the "Fire Ball" may not escape, and will begin a chain reaction that will destroy each Mirror in the end, including the one in which Tobias resides, resulting in his deposition upon the ground beneath the mirror he dwelled.

Fire Ball is another wonderful spell, by the way, thank you Nayela for your great charity in giving me these spells, and I apologize for attempting to change their descriptions, that I see vast potential in for Tobias. My idea for this spell is a more intense flame than that of a torch or such. The spell will be rewritten as "Fire of the Creators Wrath", a Holy Spell that creates a searing, white hot flame for Tobias to launch upon his enemies as he sees fit. This spell will have two seperate effects, the first is, upon souls who carry darkness but are not consumed by, it will make contact with flesh, but will not burn, the true power of the spell aimed for the Evil within their hearts, minds and souls. The Second Effect would be against those who have let Evil corrupt their existence. The energy will strike flesh and burn, searing with such heat that the fire burns white hot, as mentioned above, mean while it will cause an agonizing hell for the Evil within them as it attempts to either burn away the evil or burn away the entire being, freeing its Soul from its wicked imprisonment.

Eh you can edit the description of any weapon to fit your needs. So long as it isnt some uber powerful smiter of smite or something. If you want to add effects to it or something then you would have to go to the customs board.

For example... Say you want the Valant sword to be well... A greatsword with jwels in the blade and it shines a holy aura.... thats fine, there wouldnt be any problems with that. Buuuuuuuuuuuuuuuut, if you wanted to make the Sword say... Excalibur, with all its smity smiteness, return to hand of wielder jazz and junk... then no, tis not alloud.

All allowed anyway, you don't have to ask.

I did not wish to start a new topic when this one was still fresh, and already taken care of for the first part. The purpose of this post is to propose a spell that I did not see in the shops, and did not think any of the spells I currently possess, other than perhaps Ring of Light and Magic Shield, suited.

Name: Aura Burst
Description: This spell creates a conductive shield around a person, absorbing energy, such as Kinetic Energy (punches, weapons being swung or thrown, as well as movement nearby, within a 3 foot range from the target of the spell), Magical Energies, as well as absorbing heat from the Element Fire. Though it does not stop the attacks completely, it greatly reduces their effects, for three posts. Physical attacks still strike for the same amount of power, thus Kinetic energy merely feeds the shield, but the strike still goes through as the opponent intended. After three of the caster's posts, or sooner depending upon the amount of energy being fed, the Shield falters, and explodes, sending out shock wave equal to the amount of power that the shield fed upon.

I apologize if this spell is rather difficult to understand, and I understand that it could be rather expensive, unless certain spells I have can be manipulated to become this one spell, below is a list of the spells I have in my inventory. If there are any questions, please feel free to ask them.


List of Spells

Speed
Strength
Mirror Magic
Fireball
Magic Shield
Ring of Light
Holy Bolt

These three combined with Explosion should work. Or even just take out Fireball and use the other two with Explosion.

Sounds like Mage Armor + Explosion to me.